To Save My Life, I Have No Choice but to Make Them Fall for Each Other

Finishing the first volume's ending really depressed me. Most readers who enjoy yuri novels are there for fun and to enjoy the romantic pairings, not to find angst. It's not that yuri novels can't have angst; if the angst is present in a convoluted process and ends happily, it's undoubtedly a top-tier yuri novel. But if the author's primary intention is to write a system transmigration novel, with yuri as a byproduct, then angst at the end and sweetness in the process is perfectly fine. The first volume's ending was really over the top, feeling like angst for the sake of angst, leaving the reader with a sense of disappointment that all the protagonist's emotional investment in the female characters around him was wasted. I so wish...

It would be even more troublesome to just give me my money back, thank you.

I remember Yu Yu is a high school graduate this year. Let's wait until after the exam; it's only the last month, and it's too late to keep him busy studying. Let's wait until he finishes the exam.

Actually, what I really want is for the cremation scene to be an emotional outburst, a manifestation of the female lead's remorse. Ideally, the female lead hates the original owner of the body and does many things that hurt the protagonist. A misunderstanding before her death deepens the conflict, ultimately leading to the female lead killing the protagonist or the protagonist dying to protect her. Then, the female lead realizes her own feelings, leading to the cremation scene. Finally, in the last world or the ending, the female lead is brought back for a happy ending. The focus is on depicting the female lead's regret and self-blame after the protagonist's departure. At the end, the female lead chooses to go with the protagonist to different worlds to find him and atone for her mistakes. Of course, this is quite formulaic, especially with a villainous female supporting character...

I feel the second volume has lost its appeal. On one hand, the protagonist is very passive, to the point of losing his chastity. Asking the system for help when facing difficulties is useless. His corruption level either needs to be lowered by killing him or increased to force him to kill her according to fate. However, the former might lead to him being dragged down from his position as empress, which doesn't align with the original owner's wishes. Even if he isn't dragged down, and the female lead reconciles with the protagonist, the original owner might still harbor resentment towards her after the mission. Furthermore, the protagonist's subservience and groveling have little effect, are thankless, and leave the reader feeling frustrated. If it were the latter, I'd suggest simply having the emperor indulge in women, with the protagonist secretly courting officials and ostracizing the female lead, and contacting family members...

I wanted to comment halfway through, but I wanted to finish the whole thing to see if the plot had changed. First, one thing that puzzled me was why there was a part of the story that focused so much on whether the male and female leads were together, when the only mission was to save Su Mengmeng. Also, my biggest feeling after finishing was anger—anger at this so-called "heavenly way." Why did heavenly way favor Zhu? He didn't deserve it! And Su Mengmeng is such a pitiful person; why did heavenly way target her so much? Speaking of which, there's a plot hole left unresolved: who was the "beloved" whom Zhu sent to prison before Su Mengmeng's rebirth?

The author could refer to "Hello, May I Take You Away?"

Suddenly updated! Did you pass the postgraduate entrance exam?

First of all, let me say that this book's performance is actually quite good, especially among recent yuri (girls' love) novels. The reason the number of continued readers seems low is because it's a quick transmigration novel, so many people choose to wait until they finish the entire volume before starting to read it, otherwise getting stuck at the climax would be really frustrating. Plus, school just started two weeks ago, so most people are probably busy preparing for exams. Therefore, it's not directly related to your writing style, plot, missing chapters, or update frequency, so there's no need to spend time paying attention to certain habits, such as missing chapters. Regarding the plot, the outline of the second volume is generally fine; it's just that this kind of thing requires some angst...

Chapters 1 to 8 are missing.