Twin Souls: I Became the Hidden Personality

I crashed my bike, so I won't be able to write much for the next few days, and updates will be slower.

An author visited the comments section, saw the number of favorites for the day, and quietly left a thumbs up.

This book frequently breaks the fourth wall, and some…moe-ish? Language descriptions (such as various Japanese transliterations) are quite disruptive to the reading experience. Those who find this awkward should consider this carefully.

The fifth day of wishing the author to become a loli.

I updated! Haha, yay!

I've been really upset these past few days because of some things, as those who are in the group or follow the chat probably know. Anyway, I need to calm down, and I'll update again in a couple of days.

Let's take some time to revise those earlier chapters.

1. Is the writing style of this book a bit too frivolous? The constant use of phrases like "this b," "woc," and "damn it" is quite uncomfortable to read. These words don't belong in formal writing; they're usually only used in street thugs' conversations in novels. But our author used them in the dialogue... Which... Is a bit uncomfortable to read. 2. The author seems to enjoy giving themselves screen time. The God-like perspective dialogue often includes phrases like "Kami-sama," which, frankly, breaks the fourth wall and is quite jarring. 3. I also want to complain about the dual personality aspect. The author talks about...

Is she really a loli, author?

The twelfth day of wishing the author to become a loli.