The Disqualified Saint of a Matriarchal World

Today I reviewed the problems with the later parts of the book. Ever since Roman gained fighting abilities, the whole book has become quite boring. I'm going to seal off Roman's fighting abilities and let him continue being a weakling who gets reverse-pushed.

Milis: The unfortunate victim who has never tasted it 🤡 Loshia: The ultimate victim who has tasted it 🥵 Catherine: The blonde mom who can eat whatever she wants 🥰 Rosetta: The fallen knight who successfully stole a bite ✌🙄✌ Sylvia: Wants to be another mom to the blonde 🤫 Lastris: The secret lover who secretly steals bites 🤘 Vera: The class monitor in the battle at the entrance 👌 Maria: The dark knight who always wants to steal bites 🤓 Rosalind: The sister of the Holy Throne who wants a group sex 🥵 Linda & Lige: Good friends who lust after Roman's body 🤤 Alice & Annie: Maids (forgotten by the author) 🤔 Already at home: Catherine, Loshia, Rosetta, Lastris (in a dream) Summary: Older woman, mature woman...

Opinions on this novel are mixed, but I think it's fundamentally very well written. First, I think the portrayal of Song Jiang is excellent. It completely breaks away from the previous style where Song Jiang was blindly obedient to Tang Sanzang. Tang Sanzang is also no longer seen as constantly nagging Lin Daiyu and neglecting his duties. Even the scene where Xiahou fights Xu Sanduo is very well done, completely subverting the image of Xu Sanduo as a treacherous villain in our minds. Furthermore, Xiahou Bei doesn't develop feelings for Hua Qiangu from the beginning, as stated in the original novel. Instead, their relationship only sparks after Mei Changsu's change of heart. This kind of plot...

The plot and depth of the story are excellent, but I can only give it an 8 out of 10 because there are two points the author handled that I find extremely unsatisfactory. The first is the sentence in Chapter 84, "Roman was actually the direct cause of Leni's death." Here, the author makes a common-sense error: the "weak are guilty" argument. It should be noted that the ultimate cause and result of Leni's death was the spice, while Roman was at most an absolutely unavoidable contributing factor. I want to ask the author, is it wrong for a mother to give birth to a child with all her might? Personally, I think absolutely not, whether it's Leni who gave birth to Roman or the child Leni gave birth to...

Some of the settings make me very uncomfortable. I feel like the author forced these changes, creating contradictions. For example, the idea of ​​men being slaves and women being prostitutes—who do these prostitutes serve? Are they mostly male slaves? Slaves don't go to brothels. A small number of lesbian nobles? Leaving aside whether their numbers could support the establishments, would the very nobles go to brothels for entertainment? Lower-class men sell their labor and women sell their bodies to survive; lesbians are always a minority, while farmers are the majority. If the setting is that most men are of low quality, mostly slaves, and engaged in heavy manual labor, what are the women doing? Are they lazy and ignorant of farming? Is half the population engaged in scientific research and art? And the nobles…

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