The Reincarnated Demon King and Saintess's Isekai Fantasia

Although I apologize, I still have to say that while the themes and ideas are similar, "Rhapsody" is far inferior. The main content is about how the male protagonist becomes an overpowered dragon, and what's the point of the "loli-to-marry" trope? The male protagonist should be stronger, but all I saw throughout was a passive show-off. Also, while the story is important in light novels, the world-building is also crucial. Author, your world-building… Another point, and perhaps this is my personal opinion, is that I don't really like League of Legends. Although it's very popular, there are always people who don't like it. As someone who doesn't like the game, I found reading the author's work very difficult. Although…

First of all, I'm not a friend of the author, nor am I trying to attract attention. These are just my personal opinions as an ordinary reader, so please refrain from criticism. I've only read a few chapters. The concept is very novel, although it starts with one person having two bodies, similar to a certain other work like "I Became Her Rhapsody," but that's not inherently bad, and the content is quite interesting. However, many writing habits that shouldn't be there appear. For example, the protagonist's name is repeated too often, and there's insufficient description of the characters' inner thoughts. I don't even want to complain about the repetitive use of names… I was reading on my phone just now, and the whole screen was…

I really don't understand why so many people are saying it's plagiarism. Someone just borrowed a dual-plot structure and that's considered plagiarism? Only novels with identical settings and plots but different names are considered plagiarism, okay? By that logic, many people write novels using the isekai (another world) theme, so why aren't they considered plagiarists? Ugh, so-and-so has already written novels using the isekai theme, and you also use the isekai theme, that's clearly plagiarism (;´д`)ゞ Is that a good way to put it? Doesn't it seem a bit... Off? Overall, the plot is great, and I like the protagonist's overpowered abilities. It just feels like the author has been heavily influenced by League of Legends, adding way too much League of Legends...

First of all, your protagonist is a dual-body character! One person controls two bodies, and you completely treat them as two separate individuals. You can tell from each of your writing styles that they are not one person, which makes it impossible for me to continue reading! Secondly, the ending and direction of the story were already very obvious in chapters seventy-something. For someone like me who spends one to eighteen hours a day on this, it is unacceptable. If the ending is already predictable, why do I need to continue reading?

The book's premise is interesting—a dual-body transformation protagonist with overwhelming power—but it's also more challenging to write than some other typical overpowered protagonist novels. The author clearly put in a lot of effort, but the final product is only so-so. It's alright, but the main problem is the unrealistic portrayal of the characters' inner thoughts, and the language lacks finesse. For example, the phrase "the second before death"... Wouldn't "a time machine" be a better description? It's obvious the author is young; while the writing is immature, it still has unlimited potential. Unlike people like us, who are practically buried in the ground; if we live another sixty or seventy years, we'll be grateful. Anyway, the college entrance exam is coming up soon.

Ikun Chicken You're So Beautiful gifted the author a "Little Lolita Heart" gift worth 100,000 Fire Coins.

The subject matter is quite novel, and the atmosphere at the beginning was rather good. As someone who's been studying literature for over a decade, my tastes are quite discerning. At least for the first few dozen chapters, it was somewhat off-putting. The writing style is rather immature and dry, likely due to the author's limited vocabulary and lack of attention to detail and implied meaning. If I'm not mistaken, the author was probably still a teenager when they started writing? The character development feels somewhat hollow.

Holy crap, it's been three years, and you're still updating?!

Eighth update, that's all for today.

Crossing the barriers of time, we silently embark on a journey of memory. The signs and sentiments bestowed upon us by the years are perused by the ten children. After twilight, the long night will eventually be ended by the dawn's light. Time flows, warmth and cold alternate, and a pen dipped in deep affection meticulously sketches. This is a story about life's journey across the long river. The boy who listened attentively transforms into a boat, sailing upstream along the river of time, reaching the distant shore. This is not the end, nor the Achilles' heel of hatred; it is a tribute to all that cannot be compensated or released, transforming into a solemn, warm hope, supporting the light of life.