
How Could a Sword Immortal Girl Be by My Side?
剑仙少女怎么会陪在我身边
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- Ancient Style
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- 2y ago
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The opening scene portrays the protagonist as a genius, immediately elevating the tone and creating immense anticipation for what follows. However, as the plot progresses, the protagonist's performance becomes so lackluster that I can't help but wonder how someone respected by the entire court could act so incompetently. I really don't know if these ministers are incompetent or if the author thinks the readers are all idiots. The current state of development can only be described as: meaningless.
The protagonist of "Everyday Riddler" is also a bit of a goofball.
Why did you arrange it like this?
The first chapter gave me the feeling of a grand strategy, with meticulously designed characters. However, the characters from the esoteric sect in the second chapter seemed rather dim-witted, and their deaths felt abrupt. The key issue is that the protagonist was initially portrayed as powerful, but even after the second chapter, he's still being manipulated like a Tom Sawyer, showing absolutely no real strength or intelligence. Even if you were writing about Liu Bei, you'd still be impressive. The result was a significant letdown.
The book started off well, but the ending of the first volume was a mess. There wasn't a single decent, satisfying moment from beginning to end.
So why not just kill the emperor and declare himself king?
Having watched this far, I initially thought the male protagonist was incredibly intelligent, but the more I watch, the more I realize he's not very bright; he just relies on petty cleverness and probably only has a few theories from a more advanced era in his head.
Now we see the protagonist about to swallow the sword.
The author initially portrays the protagonist as an incredibly powerful figure, even commanding the obsequiousness of a group of martial arts masters. Logically, such a person should possess great wisdom. However, the protagonist I encountered was utterly mediocre. He even wanted to learn sword swallowing after witnessing others doing it at a temple fair. Frankly, this feels disjointed. Furthermore, aside from the protagonist himself, everyone of high status knows how powerful he is, but the protagonist himself is unaware of this. If not handled well, this could become a major flaw. I look forward to the author's later writing, hoping to at least make the protagonist appear more mature.
Speaking of which, where is the author, Sword Immortal? This first chapter is almost over; he only made a brief appearance in the previous chapters.
Oh, byd, you're still writing this book?