If I Could Start Over, I'd Never Become a Hero

The book is good, and the light novel style is well done. The plot is a bit abrupt and jumps around a bit too quickly, but it's handled relatively smoothly and there aren't any major flaws. However, after reading it twice, I feel the author seems to be writing whatever comes to mind. This flaw isn't very noticeable now that there's not much content, but I hope the author can improve. I'll read it more carefully... It seems the content doesn't really relate to the title... Perhaps the author should consider changing the title? Or perhaps rewrite the content? It's best to have as few flaws as possible in a good book. Also, keep up the good work! The book is good, the author's ideas are good, and the creative thinking is excellent. I really like it...

(My writing skills are average, and this isn't a Chinese reading comprehension exercise, so I won't go into any fancy formalities. What follows is a general overview of my impressions and some personal thoughts.) First of all, I personally think this book is very good. It's very interesting; it doesn't leave you with that "Oh, I guessed the ending" feeling after a while, nor does it have that "Wow, what the heck?!" Feeling of being overwhelmed by clichés. It strikes a good balance in terms of entertainment value, which isn't a big deal, but this book is definitely worth reading. The overall pacing of the plot is relatively gentle, with the daily life storyline and the main plot...

This is my first time writing a book review, so please forgive me if there are any shortcomings. Let me first share my impressions after finishing the book! Although this book was just uploaded, after reading only 50,000 words, I was deeply impressed by the author's immense ambition (I'll explain why later)! The writing style leans towards Japanese aesthetics; while it's a Japanese-style battle story, it also includes many slice-of-life scenes! There's even some fan service for the readers (full of erotic content)! Although the author's writing is somewhat immature, every sentence is logically consistent, preventing readers from reading the entire chapter without understanding the context. As for the protagonist, this book isn't a harem anime, and the protagonist isn't...

Well written! I hope you continue your efforts and persevere in finishing this book; don't give up halfway. I wish you would update more frequently and at a higher pace. Don't let down the expectations and support of your many fans. That would be wonderful! Finally, I wish you success in your studies. Don't let writing the novel interfere with your studies; do what you can. I hope you can further improve your skills in character portrayal and psychological description, and make the plot more substantial and detailed, instead of hastily glossing over good or crucial plot points. Keep it up, Xiao Qi!

At the author's request, I'm writing a book review this time. First of all, without a doubt, this is a Japanese-style work. The "Night Parade of One Hundred Demons," the names of the characters and swords, and even the bento boxes all have a very Japanese feel. The author could add some traditional Japanese yokai (supernatural beings). Of course, this work also has some strange aspects. Prometheus, Poseidon, etc., Are typical Western European deities. Adding them makes it seem somewhat incongruous. Also, since the male protagonist was once gender-bent, and then lost that setting in favor of someone else... (Author, you'll lose a lot of collections, monthly tickets, and fire tickets this way, because this pineapple bun is filled with gender-bent intentions...)

Updates will be irregular (just kidding).

I'm the kind of person who can't continue watching a storyline I don't like, so... To be honest, the author wrote very well in other aspects. I could tolerate some random characters, too many plot points without resolution, and the fast pacing, but... I absolutely couldn't stand the relationship between Pakunoda and that man. You didn't even handle the male lead's feelings properly before starting someone else's, is that really okay? Can you really handle that? For example, you completely ignored Sakuya and Kei later on, didn't you? So, since you're a beginner, being cautious won't hurt. Back to Pakunoda, I don't think many people will like her...

I was bored out of my mind during the Chinese New Year holiday back in my hometown, so I looked for new books to read. I ended up finishing only a few, and this was one of them. To be honest, I wasn't initially very interested in the abrupt plot developments, but thankfully the author's writing was good, and the female lead was indeed very cute, which kept me reading. I won't mention the strengths now; it's actually pretty good in all aspects, though there's room for improvement. As for the weaknesses I noticed, while the storyline sometimes jumps around a bit quickly, it's generally quite smooth. The most problematic aspect is the portrayal of emotions. The author's foreshadowing of various emotions isn't perfect, and the ending...

Damn, I flipped through the Lilia Zhengguang side story I wrote before, it's so sweet! It makes me want to write a sequel.

My recent state of mind has been much worse than I expected. There are things to do with studying, exams, and some personal matters. Of course, I know this isn't a valid excuse, but the fact that I haven't had any drafts in reserve is giving me a headache. So I've made a decision (seriously) to take a break for a month and then update properly next year... In short, I should be able to finish this book properly, and I don't have any plans to start a new one (probably).