After My Three-Foot Sword Was Broken

It's unbelievable that this book, "Silly Lolita," has only one review after reaching 900,000 words; it's quite pathetic. So, let me offer my humble opinion as the second reviewer. As a long-time reader who has followed "Silly Lolita" from "Assassin Maid" to this book, I have some understanding of "Silly Lolita's" writing style. The writing is concise and to the point, without excessive flowery descriptions, yet it conveys the essential meaning. The simple vocabulary reveals remarkable literary skill; every word is precious, making it a pleasure to read without feeling tedious, but rather stimulating the desire to continue. The theme is clear, the writing is vivid and engaging, and the characters...

This setting reminds me of the book "Lingwu Ji," although the characters in that book were incredibly annoying to write.

It's just too hard to watch a female protagonist who always uses her female advantages to take advantage of pretty girls. And yuri (lesbian) elements are always a no-go for submissive marriages.

It's excellent. Whether it's the interweaving and convergence of the initial duel's overt and covert storylines, or the flexible switching between limited and omniscient perspectives, both undoubtedly have an excellent effect on controlling the pacing of the plot and even the concealment of subplots. The character portrayals are very well done, with the most memorable being the portrayal of Grandma Su: her initial kindness, powerful abilities, mysterious identity, intriguing past, and elusive goals and pursuits… (this is just a glimpse of her character, yet it captivated me). Furthermore, the smooth and flowing narrative, along with the simple and fluent language, is also a significant strength, including the appropriately inserted narration that doesn't feel abrupt, and the seamless transitions between paragraphs…

"The Retired Maid of the Free Teacher" is my favorite transmigration story, mainly because it really appeals to my sensibilities, but my grades have always been poor, even though my slice-of-life writing is top-notch... Why not get married more often to attract some attention...?

When will the night's affair end?

The female lead's multiple personalities give me a strange feeling that Zhao is building a harem, which is a bit unsettling.

I finally finished reading it after a long, drawn-out process. To be honest, the experience was quite different from my initial expectations, but since I've finished it, I'll write something. This book is passable; it's neither incredibly good nor utterly terrible, but it's adequate for casual reading and entertainment. I'll discuss it in sections below. The idea of a traditional, classic hero transformation story actually comes from a single-volume Japanese light novel, *Battō Kyōsōkyō*, which I read a long time ago. I don't know why it's been brought up again in recent years. I've always felt that this idea...

I'd been nurturing this book for a long time, and was about to catch up when I opened the September 25th update. I stared blankly for a while, wondering if I'd killed off another one, before remembering it was September 25th.

When will the teacher update the extra chapter about Ye Xi's pregnancy? I really want to read it.