What Should a Rebel Do When the Future Empress Takes a Fancy to Him?

My personal advice is to avoid using too much of your own colloquialisms when writing a book. It's really silly to have "I said" in five out of ten sentences.

Pros: The male lead's personality is alright. Cons: 1. Lack of exciting moments, or rather, plot climaxes, which can easily discourage readers. While a dramatic plot isn't necessary, an engaging book should at least offer some sweet moments, reveal intriguing world-building or mission settings, and show interesting daily life in the early stages. However, this book lacks all of that, feeling bland and monotonous. 2. Problems with the premise. The ability to hear someone's thoughts is inherently difficult to write, and if poorly executed, it can be awful, especially when the protagonist is the one being heard. Who wants their innermost thoughts and schemes to be overheard? Everyone has negative feelings about it. 3. The plot is also...

The protagonist gets beheaded at the beginning of the story. Do you know what that means? It could become a burden. The protagonist was being led to the execution ground with a group of death row inmates. Seeing these people, who were crying like him because they were about to be beheaded, he spoke up to comfort them: "Is this your first time being beheaded?" Everyone around him looked at him: ???

Conclusion: The male protagonist is a 60-something-year-old, delusional, immature adult who has transmigrated and been reborn multiple times. Because his life has been too smooth, he finds it incredibly boring, and realizes his own cheat codes aren't obvious compared to the princess next door's. He feels the heavens are blind and won't let him show off. So he goes around causing trouble like a farce. Diagnosed with cerebral palsy.

I'm not smart, but I'm not stupid.

To be honest, the recent plot is quite confusing.

Hopefully, the author can reread their work and compare the before and after.

The novel is currently not updated much, so I don't know how the author will write it later. I hope the battlefield descriptions will be more vivid, or that the male lead's schemes will have some twists. Many new books by authors like Pineapple Bun don't have such good writing these days; this one is passable, but there's still room for improvement. The novel's premise is quite interesting, but the characters and plot have become a bit too rushed. I personally think this is because the current update length is short, but almost every character who appears is crucial to the plot, leading to some characters being underdeveloped yet appearing frequently. For example, Tista, one of the female leads, seems to disappear for a while whenever there's a war scene...

I recently bought this book and I'm currently on volume four. To be honest, the earlier parts were really good on the Pineapple Bun platform, but I just couldn't get through it after it came to Japan. I thought it was just me, so I checked the comments section and found that everyone else is experiencing the same thing. Could someone tell me where I am on the list so I can skip ahead?

To be honest, mind-reading novels are really awkward.