
The Frail Young Lady I Saved Has Turned Dark?!
我拯救的柔弱大小姐黑化了?!
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 414k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Updated
- 4y ago
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165Chapters
1.3MClicks
9.1kFavorites
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When will he turn evil? The kids can't wait!
Is it possible that after March, the three female protagonists' saved memories were restored?
It's above average, but the subject matter is novel.
The writing is mediocre and lacks atmosphere. I recommend the author read some suspense novels to learn from. I've read all 61 chapters so far; the beginning was a bit weak, but it gradually improved. The author is probably a high school student and should practice writing more. The character development is good, but the language needs improvement. Better environmental descriptions would greatly enhance the reading experience. The premise is indeed a bit outrageous, but it's not a major issue. However, I personally feel it's too flat, lacking in dramatic tension and suspense. For example, when the male lead sees the female lead die, he seems indifferent, and there's no dramatic scene depicting her death; it feels rushed. It's not as good as some other works...
I can't accept the male lead killing the female lead. I could accept him committing suicide or waiting for her to die in some other way, but to just take a gun and kill her, then cry and say sorry and it won't happen again, I think that's just stupid.
I've finished reading it. Although the details weren't handled well (such as the excessive self-awareness during the first time the cycle was broken), it's a good book overall. The main theme is that the protagonist has a save point that resets every time the female lead dies (auto-saves every seven days). The beginning might be a bit off-putting, but it gets much better later on, revealing the characters' personalities (it's clear that Miss Leng has a lot more screen time to play, making her unpredictable).
I didn't mean anything by it, I'm just complaining about the plot. It's like something I imagined in middle school, the characters' logic is too childish and haphazard.
Author, please tell me if you've referenced any manga/novels like "(My real life is a dating sim)". I have a feeling it might.
The subject matter is novel and worth watching (hehe)
To say the content is exceptionally well-handled wouldn't be an exaggeration, but the subject matter alone is refreshing. The cyclical setting easily leads to multiple shifts in the male protagonist's emotions, which is a major highlight of the story. I wonder if anyone else feels the same way—the cyclical setting immediately brings to mind angst, and I'm already prepared for some heartbreak later on. The smoothness of the narrative is, in my opinion, a crucial aspect. Take the example of the fall on the 21st: Dongfang Ai sees Leng Ruoxi's happy expression and immediately chooses to kill the male protagonist, pulling Leng Ruoxi to her death. This easily makes Dongfang Ai seem somewhat naive; I was completely stunned after reading that scene (specific scene...).
I haven't looked at this book in ages; it's still on the bookshelf.
Can you update once every five days?