Elder Sister Fairy, I'm Tired. I Don't Love You Anymore

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Waaaaah, I had a writer's block these past few days, but after organizing my thoughts, I'm back to updating today QAQ

If you don't have the writing skill and control of a master like in "The Blaze of Heaven," don't try writing a flashback. Flashbacks should be like prose—loose in form but coherent in spirit, chaotic in narrative but not in structure. A flashback beginning is fine, setting up plot points is fine, multiple storylines are fine—these are all excellent techniques. But combining all three—are you aiming for a scattered mess or a jumbled pile of crap? The narrative is chaotic and the content isn't even properly organized. In a less than 30,000-word opening, you've dug five plot points, introduced more than ten characters, locations, and events. Characters need development; are you just letting them show off their presence? That's not a problem either; with enough writing power, you can create insightful characterizations in just a few words. But I saw absolutely nothing; all I saw was the author desperately trying to show off...

The second day of urging for an update

Waaaaah, I'm a procrastinator, but I'll try my best to write! QAQ

I'm taking a day off and will update tomorrow. I'm busy preparing for the start of school today.

To be honest, while this writing style has an artistic and ethereal feel, it's also undeniably too convoluted. The biggest problems are the unclear logic, poor narrative, and deviation from the genre of a novel. This results in the entire novel leaving me with a feeling of utter confusion, whether it's the unannounced flashbacks or the lack of specific names for numerous characters present. All I can say is that the future holds promise; I hope the author can handle it better. Keep it up, and I look forward to the author creating even better works in the future.

Resurrected from the dead~ Hehe

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