Battle Through the Heavens: Forged in Blazing Glaze

I remember holding this book in my arms 6 years ago.

Looks like it's coming to an end... It's really not easy for a free novel to finish; the author is amazing.

I can't watch anymore, really, I can't watch anymore. At first, I thought it was quite novel, but the more I watch, the more I feel the protagonist is being too obsequious to Xiao Yan. He's clearly a genius; he should just focus on his training and that's it. He could help Xiao Yan as much as he can while building his own reputation. You say the protagonist has fallen in love with Xiao Yan, but what I see is a deep distrust of their relationship. When they parted, he actually offered himself to Xiao Yan, just because he was afraid the protagonist would forget him after they separated and wanted to leave a lasting impression? He even sacrificed his Dou Di bloodline for this. It's so cruel, and so insecure...

This is indeed a story about a woman being married off, but how does the author intend to develop the protagonist? In a male-oriented or female-oriented style? Of course, I don't deny that the romance is well-written, but I haven't seen any independence from the protagonist. At least so far, as a fanfiction protagonist, she's no different from a typical female character in a male-oriented wish-fulfillment novel. She doesn't seem to be striving for independence and self-reliance; it's more like Xiao Yan has gone from having two harems in the original work to having three. If that's the case, what's the point of the protagonist's existence? What's the point of fanfiction? Is the author hoping readers will project Xiao Yan's harem onto the story? At least, aside from the romance, Gongsun Liuli's character is very thin.

I always felt something was missing while reading this book, like something was missing. I finally realized it was because the "transformation" in "marriage change" was completely absent. The transition from male to female was extremely rapid, with very little "male" involvement. I didn't feel the female lead's inner transformation from male to female. It was supposed to be a major selling point, a story about a brother turning into a sister, and a shift in her inner self from calling her a "good brother" to a "feminine" degeneration. Unfortunately, I came specifically for the story, only to find she was just a slightly arrogant young woman. I couldn't feel any brotherly affection between her and Xiao Yan. Even from the moment Xiao Yan first arrived at Canaan Academy and met the female lead, I...

The main characters are rather weak, both Xiao Yan and Liu Li. Both are the darlings of an ancient Dou Di family and transmigrators, essentially possessing maxed-out buffs that make them invincible in the early to mid-game. However, their actual interactions with Xiao Yan and the depiction of their strength fail to provide any enjoyment. First, it's important to understand Xiao Yan's character: loyal, righteous, and extremely valuing his dignity. In the three-year agreement, which is heavily emphasized, Liu Li's interactions with Xiao Yan didn't feature the kind of intimate, intimate moments you'd find in typical transmigration novels. Instead, they felt overwhelmingly awkward...

It only took me one night to read this book from the first page to the latest chapter, and it's undoubtedly an interesting one. However, after reading the latest chapter, I believe the relationship between the male and female leads needs to change, and this change must be forceful and swift. From the beginning, their relationship was extremely unequal. The female lead was born with a silver spoon in her mouth, possessing extraordinary talent and immense power. Xiao Yan, on the other hand, needs little introduction. Their relationship developed entirely based on the female lead's past life's affection for Xiao Yan and her precognitive abilities regarding future events. This itself isn't problematic. The problem lies in the revelation of their true identities. At the beginning of the story, I didn't realize...

Xun'er was already doomed if she hadn't participated in the forced plot involving the Purifying Lotus Demon Flame. If Xiao Yan were to still get involved, he would be too much of a scumbag.

Is this really something I can watch for free?

My brief review of this book is that the plot lacks substance and depth. Many parts that could have been elaborated on are glossed over. For example, after the first pseudonym, An Lan, gives Xiao Zhan the pill, that pseudonym immediately disappears. Secondly, the main plot is unclear. If it's primarily about romance, then the story between the protagonist and Xiao Yan is rather strange. Even if the protagonist idolizes Xiao Yan on Earth, now that she has almost top-tier movement techniques at the start, why would she act like a simp, devoting all her time and energy to a mere Dou Zhe? This is illogical. If the protagonist's own strength is low, her motive for seeking him out is very clear: to level up by relying on his luck. But the protagonist's own...