Days as a Maid in the Demon King's Castle

First, let me explain why I gave it an 8. I initially intended to give it a 9, but because I have a friend studying Chinese language and literature, and I'm also planning to write a novel myself, I have high expectations for its literary quality. Therefore, I reluctantly deducted one point. So, this rating carries a bit of personal bias and isn't a definitive score. Objectively speaking, this novel deserves a 9. However, as a reader who became a fan within an hour, I found its slice-of-life and refreshing writing style incredibly appealing. The author's writing is also excellent, and the descriptions of daily life are handled with great skill...

Firstly, in my personal opinion, this book is one of the better-written books I've ever read. Although it depicts daily life in the Demon King's castle, the author skillfully uses various writing techniques to subtly draw the reader into events—some terrifying, others hilarious. Furthermore, the author skillfully manipulates the reader's psychology, creating a captivating and immersive experience. In my view, very few authors can achieve this level of artistry. Secondly, I'll briefly mention the book's strengths and weaknesses: ...

I really hope the protagonist won't become so useless in the future. The author might have wanted to create a protagonist who appears foolish and innocent on the surface but has a very strong personality; however, the protagonist is becoming increasingly consistent with his outward appearance as a useless character. In the author's eyes, every character is like their own child, so while Ferrora might be a very charming and well-developed character in the author's eyes, to the reader, at least in my eyes, she's just a character who constantly makes things difficult for the protagonist and is simply annoying. Honestly, Ferrora was clearly in the wrong for attacking the protagonist's convoy and forcibly kidnapping Hilda; the protagonist was just trying to save her, yet all the blame falls on him. Why should the protagonist tolerate someone who would kill his woman...?

1. The entire text feels less like a development and more like a lack thereof. The author focuses all their writing on daily fanservice, which might attract readers, but a novel without substance cannot be considered a masterpiece. 2. The story is somewhat bland, and the atmosphere is not well-developed. The explanation of some settings and basic issues is inadequate. 3. "The author's storytelling is poor. The wish-fulfillment begins too early, causing serious problems with the narrative, affecting its flow and coherence. I don't have high hopes for it." 4. The writing is mediocre, lacking highlights, but there are quite a few minor issues, such as plot logic...

The second part of Demon King's Castle has started airing; those interested can check it out!

Does anyone have this book? Can I borrow it for a fee?

This book is finally almost finished. Time flies!

Although as a freshman in college, my writing skills may not be as refined as those of seasoned writers, nor do I possess the literary flair of a seasoned editor. But when it comes to judging a work, I, after all, stood out from the hellish college entrance exam in Jiangsu ( •̀∀•́ ). From my perspective, author, your writing is quite good. You use simple, unadorned language, occasionally punctuated with witty remarks, to depict the warm and pleasant life of the protagonist, a silly and adorable fox girl, and her young female boss (maybe even her wife, hehe). There's none of the backstabbing and scheming typical of official novels, nor the various subtle affectations found in wish-fulfillment stories...

My heart aches for Til; what happened to the wedding of the Great Demon King and Hilda?

There's so much I want to say, but this book is finally finished. Without further ado, I'm taking a break to work on my new book.