Chosen Maidens, Don't Even Think About Breaking This Villain's Heart

Hahaha, here comes the real fun! The new storyline's out, but nobody's reading it yet, author! Some people say there's NTR in this, and everyone's scared and doesn't dare watch it. Well, since you've all figured it out, I'm not going to pretend anymore.

Repeatedly rewriting the same plot with a different skin, like leveling up by changing the interface, all for padding updates, the quality keeps getting worse. The other characters are like they have no brains, the writing gets increasingly jarring, you can't even plagiarize a script properly, it's just a way to get subscriptions after it's released. 😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓། – _ – །། – _ – །། – _ – །། – _ – །། – _ – །། – _ – །། – _ – །། – _ – །

Brothers, you can delete this book now. The author plans to continue writing like this. If you see this, you don't need to read it anymore. Save your money and go read other exciting and sweet stories. Of course, if you like this kind of story, then disregard what I said.

The plot these past two days has been incredibly abrupt, with constant drops in intelligence and emotional intelligence, illogical development, and character breakdowns. It seems like it was forcibly pulled apart to fit certain storylines. Frankly, this isn't how you make money, and this isn't how you create drama. I think most readers who've gotten this far won't accept this. This era doesn't welcome this kind of saccharine writing. Everyone has pressure; reading online novels is simply about finding enjoyment and amusement. Nobody likes pretentious, artsy writing; you can read it however you like, but what you're writing is a product. Is this how you treat product quality?

This is utterly terrible; it would have been better to just abandon it altogether. The beginning was actually quite good, but after it was published, it became completely stagnant. I must have been an idiot to subscribe to it... I'd be a dog if I ever read anything by this author again. This book is as bad as the stinky feet of the Chinese national football team—it's like an old woman's foot binding cloth—stinky and long...

When I got to over a hundred chapters, I realized it was incredibly padded and drawn out. One chapter for each minor character, then another for the supporting characters, then the villains, and so on. After the villains, it's time for the protagonist, and then the protagonist takes a single step before the minor character's inner monologue starts again—an endless loop. This is my first review. All those subscriptions were for nothing. Goodbye. It looks like a lot of writing, but it's actually nothing. A waste of time, money, life, and youth.

So it was plagiarized. Even such a great concept couldn't save it.

Hahahaha, I unfollowed this idiotic book the moment it updated on June 11th with the scene of Su running away from the wedding. A month later, I went back and looked at my old reviews, and haha, unsurprisingly, the author of "Dinner" has ruined himself.

I was pushed to this by the homepage, and when I clicked in, I laughed so hard. Even now, there are still tons of people leaving comments without reading those who have already read it. This is such low-quality stuff, and they're still supporting it? If they wanted this kind of writing, Fei Lu could have it; why waste money buying this garbage and suffering like this? Now, judging from the comments, it seems like it's backfired again.

For those who like NTR (Netorare) fandom, you can check out my previous short review.