About Feng Aotian Saying I’m Her Fated One

I really don't understand why there are logical flaws in the opening.

Is the author giving up? It gets worse and worse as it goes on.

It was alright, but the main character was a bit too much like Yang Wei, which made me uncomfortable.

It's not exactly rough, but the pacing is a bit too fast. Suddenly the sect is gone, suddenly the villain dies, and the villain's trope is similar to that of the evil cultivator from before? They all just break through to a higher level, then the protagonist pulls out an even stronger move to turn the tide. Don't add any more sudden plot twists! But it's well-written.

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The ending of Volume 1 turned into a typical shonen (hot-blooded) novel from Qidian.com... I hope Volume 2 won't be like that, otherwise, wouldn't it be better to read a pirated copy?

Can you please stop with the constant "oh" in Volume 2? It's disgusting!

The pacing is too fast; it could be written slower for more vivid character development. Also, some points I find illogical. First, the villainous disciple from the auction house immediately wants to marry a sect leader—this plot point is incredibly jarring and makes the villain seem brainless. He's completely infatuated with a woman, ignoring the issue of seniority. A disciple with a mountain of resources trying to propose to a sect leader who's not short of money? It's absurd! Can he really succeed? The villain's intelligence has plummeted. Then, let's talk about Sect Leader Chen. After using the male lead as a shield, he completely disregards his safety. A total sycophantic attack...

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Author, the plot you've arranged is simply unbearable to read… Let me start with the part I find most unbearable: the purpose of treating someone's illness is to seek protection, but you just show up with that nonchalant attitude, completely destroying any initial goodwill… Don't tell me the sect leader never intended to help the protagonist; someone saved your daughter, you can't just leave without doing something, right? Otherwise, what would become of your reputation as the sect leader? Then you insist on bringing a straw into the toilet—you're asking for trouble, flirting with the Nascent Soul cultivator, demanding they take off their clothes while acting like, "Oh dear, I have no choice but to take them off, otherwise I won't be able to cure the illness, and I don't want to see them," isn't that just asking for trouble? Originally, I was just looking for…