The Soulful Melody of Her and Me

I just saw the author mention that their work passed the approval process and asked, "Will anyone read it if I become a VIP?" I think instead of asking readers whether they'll read it and letting their attitude determine whether to publish, it's better to calculate the potential income after publication and see if you can accept that kind of income. Let's start with an optimistic analysis. Currently, the author has 2075 favorites. Assuming 10% of these readers subscribe, and only 50% of those subscribers use vouchers, let's roughly calculate the author's potential income. Assuming an update schedule of 3000 words per day, 30 days per month. One update per day on the 30th of each month, 3000 words per chapter, 0.05 yuan per thousand words...

It's quite moving. I think I read this book back in middle school. It was the first novel that got me hooked on Pineapple Bun, haha. You can tell how cringeworthy I was back then just by looking at my Pineapple Bun ID, haha. I suddenly remembered this novel and looked it up, thinking it was either finished or abandoned a long time ago. I didn't expect that the author had actually written it all this time! From middle school to now, I'm a freshman in college. I can't believe how much time has passed! I almost want to cry for a moment. Time, oh time!

Author, what genre is your book? Is it a yuri harem/transformation/marriage story? Or is it about transforming back into a harem? Will the male lead and female lead still become soulmates? Please tell me! Also, I hope you can use more embellishment. I've seen similar novels before with super concise and beautiful rhetoric, like "pretty" and "cool," but it's like reading nothing at all, leaving me completely confused. So, I hope you can write it in more detail. Although the ending depends on the author, I still hope the protagonist can transform back into a yuri character. If that's not possible, a yuri story is fine too. I really don't want her to get married; just imagining two men getting married makes me feel terrible!

France, China, and other countries completely abandoned the remnants of feudalism because their productive capacity had reached a high level, requiring a more efficient rate of resource allocation. The author, being a high school student, should be familiar with this—Marx's two inevitabilities—and could ask their political science teacher. As for Athenian democracy, it has nothing to do with productive capacity and shouldn't be confused with it. After all, productive capacity was roughly the same at that time, but imperial and republican systems encompassed many aspects; the main influencing factor was social ideology.

This book has a minor, harmless flaw: the author sets up a society with highly developed production capacity but still under a feudal system. In an information society with computers, feudalism is clearly inadequate for the current level of production. It cannot quickly and effectively allocate social resources. When production capacity develops to a certain stage, the old system will inevitably be eliminated and overthrown. Like early England, where feudalism could barely adapt to the development of production capacity, so a monarchy was retained. But later, in the United States…

First, while the author's use of first-person narration is bold, the transitions between the two main characters in the early stages are somewhat confusing and unclear. Also, a few words praising someone's beauty would suffice, but the author's excessive use of phrases like "as beautiful as a fairy, leaving everyone around speechless" immediately after the male lead's transformation feels exaggerated. Too much of a good thing can be bad; using so many words to describe the protagonist's beauty just feels narcissistic. Furthermore, the queen is rather comical. When I saw her escaping, I wondered if she would run into the male lead, and sure enough, she immediately fawned over him because he was beautiful. This is illogical. Some older authors might want to take a look at the comments next door...

Actually, there's nothing to worry about. If you continue writing like this, you might even become as popular as your previous TS novels. After all, you've been published, which will give you a homepage recommendation. You only gained popularity after being featured on the homepage because you had few followers initially. No one starts with tens of thousands of favorites. Little by little, we believe in you. Finally, if you have any suggestions, please accept them; if not, feel free to leave it at that. However, I've recently encountered several authors whose attitudes were okay before publication, but became truly terrible afterward.

3 days, 5 million, Zun Du, fake Du

Free for a limited time? Three days? 5.43 million words?

I read up to chapter 6 of volume 5 and the last 5 chapters of volume 12. In conclusion, this book is not yuri. There was yuri content in the beginning, and the author even said it was highly likely to be yuri, which is why I read so much, including scenes of sex between yuri characters, only to find out it's not yuri – a word game. I was very angry, but after calming down, I felt nothing but regret. This is the second book I've encountered where the author claimed it was yuri but it wasn't. The previous one had the yuri tag, so I spent 50 yuan to read it, but the updates were too slow, so I stopped reading. A month later, the yuri tag was gone, so I stopped reading. When I finally finished it, it wasn't yuri, and I gave up. Personally, I think it was a waste of time and money, and the ending (the protagonist turning back into a man or having male genitalia...)