I Wanted to Break Off the Engagement, but the Chosen Heroine Refused!

The case is solved! The latest chapter features the author who skipped out on his bill and got arrested.

I have some questions. Isn't this supposed to be a comedy? I've read over 100 chapters and it's still quite depressing! So many intricate plots! And it seems the fiancée might not have been with the male lead in her past life! Also, time travel, rebirth, a cheat ability, and a male lead with a heavenly destiny—don't you think there are too many elements? And the romance—I've seen many people say it's good, maybe I haven't seen the romance develop yet? I haven't felt there's much romance! The daily life is also very depressing! And the male lead's family is supposed to be quite powerful, yet they only sent a Golden Core cultivator? And the protector is only a Foundation Establishment cultivator? And that Nan guy, a Golden Core cultivator, can just chatter away with the male lead? As the saying goes, even when beating a dog, you have to consider its owner...

This is my first time writing a book review, so I'm not sure how to begin. I'll just point out a few aspects I think are good. 1. The characters' psychological descriptions are detailed, their portrayals are quite profound, and their personalities are quite likable, giving a good impression, especially the junior sister, who left a deep impression. 2. The plot is coherent and suspenseful, with the narrative unfolding gradually and comprehensively, resulting in a strong sense of completeness. Furthermore, the author's planning for the novel's future is good; the story isn't rushed but rather developed steadily and progressively. These are two of the book's strengths. I won't list the other merits, but I hope the author's books continue to improve.

The plot flows smoothly, and the emotions and world-building gradually expand and develop. It's very stable, but my review can only be described as: solid, but lacking in some aspects. Let's start with the writing. Once the dialogue unfolds, especially with multiple characters, it's mostly just a back-and-forth exchange, like wooden puppets just talking. There's a lack of connection between the characters' actions and words, making it feel lifeless. For example, in a group conversation, she steps on the protagonist's foot, and the protagonist endures the pain—this action should be noticed by others, and there should be a scene like (everyone stares at the two protagonists with strange expressions). Those who are gossipy or have different perspectives about the protagonist could be individually described with their expressions, actions, or inner monologues...

I've almost forgotten the plot of this book about tomb sweeping, but I still really want to read it.

Come back, my author 😭 My proudest belief 😎 My junior sister is still vivid in my mind 👰 Tears are inexplicably flowing 😭 I vaguely remember Hua Xuechen 🙋 And there are also great maids 🙆 The main character's kidneys were ruined 🤤

I really like the character of the junior sister, but I felt like she had less screen time later on. Her coldness towards the first character after the second one came along made me feel a little uncomfortable.

Is this how you treat us like brothers?

I almost removed this book from the shelf, but it came back to life.

In my book review, I'll start with the shortcomings and then the strengths. Shortcomings: The early chapters were indeed somewhat mindless, but that's understandable since the author is just starting out. It gradually improved later on. As for those who say it's padded, the author didn't padded it out; it's probably because the jokes weren't funny, or because it only updates once a day, and you finish it in one go, that's why people think it's padded. Strengths: The characters' emotions are nuanced, although I didn't quite understand them at first, but it got better. The fight scenes were also quite good; I feel like there could have been more action. The book subtly reveals a vast world-building. Personally, I think: the author's daily updates...