Reborn, I Absolutely Won't Let You Torment Me Again

The writing is overly descriptive and filled with tedious paragraphs and meaningless plot devices. Each chapter lacks clear transitions and flow, resulting in a disjointed and disjointed narrative. The middle sections of each chapter, intended to highlight key plot points, are then filled with unnecessary embellishments and descriptions, and the chapter endings fail to provide any conclusion or cliffhanger. Overall, the author seems to have little experience with novels, as the writing style resembles a composition. It is recommended to revise the outline, clearly defining the approximate number of chapters for each plot segment. This would allow for a clearer understanding of the pacing of each chapter, leading to a more concise and efficient plot progression, unlike the current writing style...

2. Regarding the male lead's character development. Although the male lead's two lives were undeniably tragic, I still have to criticize him. In his first life, I could attribute his actions to being love-struck. After all, he married the daughter of his father's killer, used his parents' inheritance to fund her company, and ultimately didn't get a good outcome. It was truly an act of excessive filial piety. Of course, the male lead could separate the Ding family's actions from Ms. Ding. This assumes that Ms. Ding is indeed a grateful person, truly willing to turn against the Ding family who persecuted her childhood for the male lead. But the result? The male lead, entrusted to the wrong person, gave me the feeling of...

So I'm definitely not going to follow the new book anymore; it's a story about a king who abandons his post.

The author's attitude towards his writing is terrible. He started two books simultaneously, then abandoned this one to write the other. I've been reading since he first started writing, and the updates are severely delayed. He promised extra updates the next day, but I never saw them. When other readers asked why there were no updates, he said he had no inspiration. But readers have been waiting for so long. The author clearly doesn't realize that what readers who care about his work look forward to most every day is seeing updates to their favorite book. He doesn't use excuses to write what he's currently interested in when readers urge him to update. But who cares about us who are waiting for updates?

No procrastination, just feeling down. I think I've recently developed a "don't want to write" syndrome.

Just like the stars I gave it, this is a moderate assessment of a work. To put it kindly, it's just average; to put it bluntly, I believe you all know what I mean. Since the author says it's a new work, I personally consider this score a form of support. If you like novels about regret and chasing after a husband/wife, you can give this a try, but it's just so-so. If you're a pure romance reader, I suggest you don't waste any time and leave. I understand the author's desire to attract readers, but I have to do the right thing. Since the author says the male lead will be a jerk, it falls into the harem category, and for an extremely...

This book... Has so much of the affected sentimentality I used to express on QQ Spaces back in junior high... To put it in modern terms, it's got an overwhelming amount of NetEase Cloud Music depression. I don't recall this being a criterion in the definition of "anime/manga fiction."

Why does everyone keep thinking this story is about Su and Ding getting back together? Has anyone even researched General Yang Jingyu? Why did he fight to the very end? This kind of hatred and pain cannot be soothed by anything! The protagonist was a devoted, subservient son his whole life, and after being harmed like this, he can still recover? It's already a miracle he didn't directly take action to solve the problem! Always thinking about going against humanity for so-called love—what kind of environment did you all grow up in? Anyone who has even followed the news of the past few years wouldn't dare to spout such nonsense about them getting back together! When the damage reaches a certain threshold, the relationship between the two becomes one of life and death! And to resolve this conflict...

Well, I was planning to update in the next few days, but I had to go on a date these past two days (May 20th and 21st), so I'll update tomorrow.

This is the author's debut work (I think), and the writing style is somewhat immature and immature, which is a shortcoming, but it's quite normal and reasonable. I believe the author will improve with practice. The best part of the story is the description of emotions. I believe many readers, like myself, cried when Lin Huanmeng said goodbye to the male lead. For a novel, being able to empathize with the reader and create a sense of identification is already half the battle won. The only shortcoming of the novel is that although the author carefully portrayed the relationship between the male lead and Lin Huanmeng, and other emotional descriptions were also given considerable attention, it still falls slightly short in comparison. It lacks subtlety, and the author's word choice in some places...