The Tycoon's Daughter Falls in Love with Me

Having read novels for years, this is the first time I've felt so frustrated. If you want to write a tragic story, just tag it as such! "The Rich Girl Falls in Love with Me"? I don't recommend this novel. Seriously, it's just a story of someone being bullied. Not a single satisfying moment in the first 140,000 words. I didn't see a shred of justice. Its values are warped. I don't believe this novel won't be a flop. There's not a single satisfying moment. If you're going to write a novel, I suggest you find another platform. This is a light novel platform; I never expected light novels to contain such a tragic story.

It's like stepping back into the era of mindless melodramatic romance novels on Jinjiang Literature City. This kind of deep-seated hatred allows characters to coexist peacefully with their enemies, a truly self-congratulatory act. It's bizarre. From bone marrow to hands to eyes to feet. A minor saved your daughter, and you act this way just because you threatened her? This mindless melodrama should at least have some social morality. It's not that rich people are completely inhuman and brainless. I really don't recommend these bizarre melodramatic stories entering the public eye; they're too morally bankrupt. This kind of vigilante justice is a serious crime. I don't understand why they wrote it this way to portray the characters as tragic. This kind of inhumane plot is truly disturbing.

... I'm sorry, I did understand long ago—in that so-called objective and rational, but actually just a pursuit of an alternative God's perspective, human emotions can be manipulated at will, will can be wantonly destroyed, and fate can be trampled on at will... But as an ordinary but normal person, I will never agree with it, never approve of it, neither rationally nor emotionally—because it doesn't deserve to be called a razor blade, but merely a feeling of disgust. While I've unintentionally swallowed quite a few razor blades, fortunately, I haven't stepped on many landmines. Despite my limited experience, I still want to express my own views—because, ultimately, I have no...

It's definitely awful. The values are warped, the characters are poorly developed, and the character designs don't hold up. The writing is also terrible, only slightly better than an elementary school student's. The characters' brain holes are bigger than those created by a meteorite on Mars. If you're just writing for your own amusement, then go ahead and ignore what I said. But if you really want others to read it, don't write the characters so brainless, unreasonable, and like complete idiots. Anyway, if you're going to read it, please don't use your brain at all, or you'll feel like vomiting by the end.

The entire book is illogical and contains some inexplicable plot points, such as the adoptive father's sudden second paralysis. Many scenes feel contrived and gratuitous, with the old man's change in attitude towards the protagonist being extremely abrupt. The protagonist feels like a mere plot device, lacking any real presence. The romantic elements also fail to reflect the characteristics of a tragic literature genre, resulting in forced and unrealistic portrayals of pain. In my opinion, pure love should involve mutual communication and understanding, and genuine affection, not the pity or condescension shown by the young lady towards the protagonist. Based on this plot, I cannot understand how the protagonist could possibly fall in love with the female lead. This leads to...

The early part of the story, before the second encounter with the female lead, was quite good, very natural and reasonable. But why did it start to fall apart later? It felt like the plot was forced in just for the sake of effect. I can't believe the creator could write such a grotesque character. I've never been able to understand angst-filled or depressing stories, not just as a reader, but also as a creator. Even tigers don't eat their cubs; original characters are like one's own children, they should receive parental love. I'm also speechless about the plot where the adoptive father is injured a second time. This development, with the parents going out to work, the father getting injured on the job and becoming bedridden, forcing the protagonist to work...

No rush, let's grab a late-night snack first.

Anyone who read this far is a genius. I admit, I thoroughly enjoyed writing it.

I was typing and typing, and then I fell asleep.

The novel seems to cover a lot, but it really only emphasizes Li Yang's tragic fate. The young lady spending five years searching for Li Yang, Yang Wen's sudden resurgence, the high-tech helicopters, mercenaries, the lab attack, and the inexplicable discovery of his biological son in the orphanage—all these plot points are incredibly far-fetched and illogical. One second Li Yang and Yang Wen are barely surviving, the next Yang Wen returns like a dragon king, exacting his revenge, while Li Yang is transformed into a girl, acting strangely and isolated in the orphanage. The beginning, with 7-year-old Li Yang caring for Yang Wen until he's 12, collecting bottles and selling his blood—all done comfortably—is relatively well-structured, but the later plot... Well... It's all about giving up, and the true intentions are revealed later.