I Clearly Became a Villain, So Why Am I the Heroine's Favorite?

I think the author should reorganize their outline and rewrite the story systematically according to their own pace. Throughout the story, I've seen the author constantly adjusting the plot and pacing based on reader feedback, which has resulted in distortions and disjointed narratives. I thought the beginning was quite good; the male protagonist had his own intelligence. His investigation of the cases and Bai's personality change were understandable. Many people wouldn't want to say a word to someone they're not interested in, but when they care about someone, they become talkative and sentimental. I think there was nothing wrong with that. However, it started to go astray after the old butler's sacrifice...

I've been writing the outline for my new work these past few days, it's been incredibly brain-draining. Once I'm done... I'll come back as soon as I'm finished.

At first, I thought it was an infinite rebirth story, which was a good premise, but the writing is really messy. I started to get confused from the courtroom scene. By the latest chapter, I had absolutely no idea what it was about. As for the characters, the male and female leads, who were described in great detail in the early chapters, seemed incredibly stupid. I really couldn't understand the female lead; besides being pretty, she had absolutely no purpose and completely ruined the reading experience. The male lead, as the antagonist, had died so many times, yet he was still so immature. This is a rebirth story, not a fantasy novel! If the male lead isn't developed with some intelligence, what's the difference between this and those mindless fluff stories? And the male lead's feelings for the female lead were so contrived...

Happy New Year!

I've finished reading the whole book and would like to share my thoughts and some issues I noticed. First, the first three chapters are excellent; both the writing style and the suspense are top-notch in science fiction. However, after those first few chapters, something felt off. The original protagonist, "Ye Lingxian," doesn't actually appear until around chapter 30? This is clearly strange. Usually, in the early chapters, readers want to see the interactions and conflicts between the transmigrator, the female lead, and the original protagonist. It's one thing for the original protagonist to appear late, but even after appearing, their interaction with the protagonist is pitifully small. The protagonist is still struggling with and unable to distinguish "Ye Lingxian's" gender...

As a fan of cultivation novels like *Xian Ni*, *Zhu Xian*, *Fan Ren*, *Yi Nian Eternal*, *Ling Jian Shan*, *Stellar Transformation*, and *Perfect World*, I found the author's concept interesting, but only superficially so. It feels like a bait-and-switch tactic. While the book is a cultivation novel, the latest chapter doesn't reveal any difference between cultivators and mortals. Let's start with the flaws: 1. Currency. In the cultivation world, the currency is gold and silver. While this is understandable for low-level Qi Refining cultivators, shouldn't the spiritual herbs, artifacts, talismans, and arrays used by Foundation Establishment cultivators be based on spirit stones...?

I couldn't bear to watch Ye Lianxian and Bai holding hands anymore, even though the author said there would be an explanation later. I just couldn't accept it.

Disclaimer: This review only addresses the character portrayals in the novel and does not include the author himself. I honestly don't know what to say. The plot was novel at first, and I enjoyed reading it, but it went astray later. That Bai Shuxi character... Maybe it's just me, but the more I read, the more disgusted I became. I really don't know what to say, speechless. 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

The author's writing skills are evident from the first few chapters; the world-building is excellent, and it's clear the author wanted to break free from the constraints of many other light novels and write something different (486: ?). The initial impression was also quite good; even with the female lead being so unlikable, I still kept reading. However, author, you've dug way too many plot holes! My current feeling is: Who is he? Who is this person? Why did he do this? Why is everyone a mystery character? It's really exhausting to read. Add to that the indescribable handling of the female lead's romantic storyline, and the viewing experience has plummeted. Dude, my dear brother, look at you...

I just tested negative. A close relative passed away a couple of days ago, so I've been quite busy... I'm currently working on my new book, which needs a lot of revisions. Please give me a few more days...