
After I Was Reborn, All the Female Students Were Darkened Young Ladies
重生后女学生都是黑化大小姐
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- Completed
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- 989k Words
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- Campus
- Updated
- 4y ago
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Is this a reboot? It feels like... I've seen it before?
Dear author, please update more often, thank you!
Is the author dead yet?! If not, hurry up and update! Even the donkeys in the production team wouldn't dare rest like this.
The subject matter is quite novel, but it has many shortcomings.
Going against the grain, while it's supposed to be about saving someone, it actually causes them to become corrupted—that's an interesting idea. But that's limited to the subject matter. First, let me point out a very basic error—I misspelled the name several times. I didn't check back, so I don't know if I corrected it. This definitely deserves criticism. Secondly, regarding the issue mentioned by the 6-star commenter earlier, the protagonist accepting rebirth too quickly, I think that since they're going to accept it anyway, it's better to be concise and clear, using the fewest words possible to rationalize the protagonist's acceptance of rebirth and their subsequent thoughts. Then, for some illogical parts, a supernatural attribute is introduced later, directly resolving many issues… such as rebirth itself, and Xia Chu's corruption before rebirth…
Some of them shocked me.
First, let me clarify that although I've only read the first four chapters, I was shocked four times. My most immediate impression was the inexplicable logic—what my teacher would call logical inconsistencies. For example, after the male protagonist was stabbed, shouldn't he have stayed away from them? If not, at least let him struggle internally before offering to help them. Instead, he simply says he'll help them, but without explaining how, leaving the reader completely confused. And looking at the comments, most readers feel the same way, meaning it's not just one person who finds it problematic. In fact, there are many more such inconsistencies. Forget about having a brilliant plot; you...
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When will the main text be updated?
It's a bit heartbreaking that the author's millions of words of yandere novel couldn't compare to a 200,000-word yandere novel.
The frequency of spelling errors is really high; was this written by a middle school student?
Read and cherish, as the author's books are easily banned.