The Working Witch and Me, the Exorcist

Reading Progress: Volume 3. Before starting my review, although it's a bit late, I still have to congratulate Lan Shen on successfully becoming a VIP book. As Lan Shen mentioned in his launch announcement, he's been consistently active for several months, putting in a lot of effort, so its inclusion in the VIP program was expected. I feel the style of this book is closer to a fantasy school novel. The story takes place on a school campus, and the protagonists, Lan Feng and Zi Nan, along with various other characters, possess unique abilities, adding a touch of fantasy. Overall, it reads smoothly, and the atmosphere is light and enjoyable. It's quite commendable...

For the sake of monthly tickets, cough cough~ Keep it up, author! I'm so lazy with writing that I'm almost too lazy to organize my thoughts (→_→), so I'll just say whatever comes to mind, don't mind. I'll skip about a thousand words of praise here. ["Okay, Lan Feng, please sit down. After school today, please come to the office. We, we, will, talk, about, your, work, rest, combination." Although the teacher's tone sounded calm, it seemed like black flames were burning behind it. I must be mistaken, I must be!] This paragraph from the first chapter. Let me address a small issue first, ["We, we, will, talk, about, your, work, rest, combination"] here I...

Commentator: While traditional heterosexual romance stories are never lacking in competitiveness, this one didn't perform well, likely due to the chaotic narrative in the first few chapters and the excessively long first battle. It's unclear whether the author intended a dual-protagonist approach or not, but the perspective constantly shifted between the female and male leads in the early chapters, and the first-person narration in the synopsis became third-person in the main text. These points are problematic, especially the overly lengthy battle. Even in action movies, a battle taking place in the same scene wouldn't last more than ten minutes—compared to the length of these chapters...

The novel begins with the protagonist fighting a weak undead to a standstill, even bleeding from the wound. Then it's revealed he's an S-rank exorcist—are you kidding me? That undead would practically fly away! And later, it's said a teenage girl can defeat an A-rank exorcist—does that mean she'll become an SSS-rank when she grows up? I completely don't understand how the author structured this; it seems like utter nonsense, just random random writing. And the female lead, after going berserk, almost killed the male lead and can create a domain at will—does that mean she'll be unstoppable as an exorcist? With this kind of writing, won't S-ranks be everywhere and A-ranks just cannon fodder later on...?

Although the first two chapters were a bit rough, they got quite good after the introduction of other storylines! This shows the author's continuous effort to write better stories—you can see the progress! I love reading the battles between exorcists and the undead—they're so exciting…and the shy moments between the male and female leads…I'm really looking forward to the romance, but I hope it's not too melodramatic—hahaha (I personally like a little bit of horror and a little bit of BL *\(^o^)/* I hope the author will consider that). I highly recommend it to everyone!

Still alive

I came here to see how the succubus and the male lead have an NRT (r? 8) scene. No, no, no, there's more later. I'm quite into it, but I don't know if the main wife and the second wife will have any objections. Is it gay? They shouldn't have any objections, since he's called the uke? (I'm just here to get votes.) By the way, the young lady is super cute 😜 The second wife is a semi-yandere (oops, big boss, don't hit me, Blue God). Also, a bit of humor. And another side story, the fan service isn't enough, sob sob.

Happy New Year! I was planning to finish this volume by midnight, but I accidentally wrote two chapters. I'll write an afterword tomorrow. Happy New Year everyone!

Distant Update

If I don't have to work overtime, I should continue updating.