The Boy in a Feminist World

For some reason, as a staunch supporter of harems, I kind of hope the protagonist will see the error of his ways. Such harems are all about lust, like a harem where the protagonist has no real feelings whatsoever. Watching them makes me feel a bit disappointed with society, since there are many people like that in reality.

Perhaps it was the innocent cuteness in the early stages that made me like it, but I simply couldn't accept the later change. The pacing was just too fast. Readers only saw a few days when the child was six years old, while the nine years of developing their relationship were glossed over... I'm speechless.

The logic in the last few chapters has been a bit strange. Many superficial misunderstandings have been forced to unfold, which I didn't quite understand. I don't understand the male lead's thought process; on one hand, he's weakly obeying orders to break up, and on the other hand, he doesn't shy away from continuing to have sex with Ziqing. Personally, I think he shouldn't be so indecisive and haphazard. While it's true that you can read novels without thinking, try doing it with the genders reversed. Honestly, the male lead's actions in these chapters are truly absurd and contrived rather than endearing. Just a suggestion, for your reference.

The pacing should be a bit faster, with the protagonist suffering from both parents' deaths. These parents aren't online; it should be a more angsty pace. Adoption by someone else, preferably their neighbor, is preferred. The timeline should jump quickly to when the protagonist starts school; of course, the kid driving a big car is fine too, I don't mind, and I believe most readers wouldn't mind either. Anyway, the tag says reverse harem, and it's a female-dominated world, with the protagonist so weak and timid, so it'll be completely explicit from beginning to end. A few examples of the protagonist being sexually assaulted by their teacher at school, or even being locked up and disciplined, are fine with me. If you already have an outline and have a basic plan for the rest of the story, then disregard what I said. Maintain this pace; it'll be very heartwarming. Of course, what I'm writing now is also quite good. ...

Long live the harem! Only a pure love harem can heal my broken heart. NTR cuckoldry is the most despicable thing in the world. Author, please keep up the good work!

The beginning was well-written; I could tolerate skipping the nine-year timeline and jumping straight to the girlfriend, and I could even tolerate the first time being glossed over. But I can't stand the male lead wanting to break up with Lin Lan because of a single sentence. How much screen time does Lin Lan have? Who is she? Zi Qing has been with you since childhood, right? You two know each other well enough, don't you? Your relationship is mutual, right? How can this be justified? You can have a harem, you can include Lin Lan, but the main character can't be a bad person. I really liked this book, it's a pity.

I really liked how innocent, kind, and adorable the male lead was as a child. I felt it was unfair that he acted hypocritically and betrayed Yu Ting's love as an adult.

Damn, something felt off from the beginning, then the feeling improved in the middle, but then it made me want to vomit. I know it's a harem, but this isn't how you do it! It's disgusting; the male lead doesn't deserve Yu Ting at all.

Ugh, I'm so angry! You're a guy from a feminist camp! You gave up something at fifteen, so cherish it! Don't break up with someone just because they say a few words to you! I've lived this long and I'm still not willing to give up anything!

At first I thought it was a pure love story, but then it turned into a harem.