I Was So Beautiful That the System Turned Me into a Girl for Conquest

Damn, I've revealed myself! I'm a prophet! I'm actually number one on the first page of the homepage!

Why does the book "Tomato Free Novels" require a VIP on "Pineapple Bun"?

Let's start with the book's strengths. First, the setting and world-building are quite interesting, combining cultivation, superpowers, and a system—overall, it's good. Second, the characters are well-developed. The male lead is handsome and his peculiarly endearing inability to find friends is charming, while the female lead is somewhat annoying yet genuinely kind-hearted, righteous, and endearingly naive. Both are quite interesting. Finally, the story's development is well-written, creating anticipation and making for a pleasant reading experience. Now, let's talk about the weaknesses, starting with the major issues. First, the author's writing style is somewhat lacking...

I've read 67 chapters so far, and overall, it feels like a "high start, low finish" (?). Aside from the gender reversal at the beginning and the later plot involving the male (?) Protagonist concealing his identity, the rest of the story feels rather ordinary, though not bad. The biggest problem lies in the emotional portrayal. Here are a few points based on my personal opinion: 1. There's too little description of the relationship between Su Qingqing and Ting An. Simply adding the setting that they're best friends doesn't really resonate with the reader. Incorporating some of their daily interactions through flashbacks might have been better. There will be more scenes involving them later, so I hope the author can develop these characters more thoroughly...

I'm outta here! To each their own, I still want to eat dog food (a slang term for public displays of affection).

The last update was on February 22, 2022 at 10 PM... Did the author go to another world?

This author's bad habit of spending a lot of time writing about useless supporting characters—does he really think he's writing an ensemble drama?

It looks fine overall, but author, could you please reread it after you finished writing? There are just too many mistakes.

I feel like this book will be delayed.

I came back from his new book, to sweep the tomb.