Immersed in Card Crafting, I'm Pursued by a Host of Goddesses

The book is great, I don't understand why the rating is so low! Even though I don't have the money to subscribe, I'll still give it a rating to support the author! ...

The action scenes were really exciting, but the romance was a bit awkward.

I've had some connections with the author, Ink, so I came to check it out. Objectively speaking, the book is actually quite well-written. It's just that some of the tropes feel very familiar, but there's a considerable audience who enjoy this style, since reading web novels is all about being relaxed and entertaining, and I'm one of them. However, the book's setting is a bit of a hodgepodge, sometimes sci-fi, sometimes fantasy, which sometimes made me laugh and cry, and some characters' personalities are a bit inconsistent! Especially the protagonist... Some of his actions are clearly out of character. Of course, since Ink, you've adopted this writing style, it's definitely aiming to compete with traditional web novels! As long as readers enjoy it and there's no fundamental...

This book is very well written. Although the plot is a bit clichéd, I enjoyed reading it. As for the newly introduced female character, having read many online novels, I can already guess what will happen next. I hope the author won't disappoint me!

Why do I feel that the first few chapters are a bit too formulaic?

Activate the magic card "Will of a Mortal"! Doro... Doro... Activate the talent to synthesize the character card "Seto Kaiba"! I, Kaiba, never shuffle the deck! I'm guaranteed to get the card I want.

Furthermore, the protagonist was once a member of a privileged class, but in school he was a withdrawn old man, bullied and ostracized. Even after a major family upheaval, his inherent nature couldn't be hidden. Now, however, he's a cowardly, overthinking, and brooding recluse, a stark contrast to his behavior when saving people and fighting off school bullies. I've focused more on this aspect. The writing is decent, but the character descriptions lack detail and the plot isn't particularly engaging. Keep it up, this book can be better.

To put it simply, the main plot is unclear, the male lead's character is vague—he beats up the school bully, becomes a pushover when he meets a girl, but he's neither a rational, low-key professor nor a carefree protagonist like in a wish-fulfillment novel. He tries to have the ability to pursue girls, but constantly rejects their invitations and gets disheartened. Who's waiting for you to have the ability? Besides, after reading 22 chapters, none of the supporting characters are good people; they're all acting like spring has arrived. The tagline is "hot-blooded," but it's not a typical urban romance web novel.

Author, that's great! But you should still strengthen the protagonist's talents a bit. Like, maybe create talent cards, etc. ᔪ꒰ ꒪ω꒪ |||꒱

I remember someone wrote something similar in the past, something like this (but the protagonist was an overpowered protagonist).