I, the Peerless Demoness, and Those Righteous Immortal Maidens

I skimmed through 10 chapters, and overall it was good, but the punctuation... Doesn't the author find it painful, amazing, absurd, or embarrassing? Leaving aside the reading experience, there are also some ambiguities, especially with words that can be read separately but together. In short, the plot and characters initially attracted me, but the more I read, the more frustrated I became with the punctuation. I really want to continue reading, but I just can't take it anymore.

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I wonder if the system will become human-like later on? I'm kind of looking forward to the female lead and the system getting together.

It's so strange, this is really hard to read. It feels like a stream-of-consciousness piece. Did the author use voice input? The punctuation is so bad it really affects the reading experience. I can't even read it sentence by sentence; I have to skim it to get a general idea of ​​the plot, otherwise I really can't keep reading. It's too difficult. The writing style also needs improvement; there's nothing particularly engaging. I'd say it's worth a look, but there are no highlights, and the theme is rather old-fashioned. This is just my personal reading experience. You can ignore it if you don't want to take it as advice; I'm just venting. I'm currently experiencing a reading slump.

Does the author even know how to punctuate? This article feels like it was typed out, with random sentence breaks.

Seeing the "favorability rating" thing makes me instantly not want to look at it anymore. Feelings can't be expressed by a 100-point score; that feels very unreal, like trying to win over a soulless character in a game.

I hope to see it completed before my college entrance exam in 2023.

I've been reading novels on Pineapple Bun for 3-4 years, and this is my first time writing a review. I don't care about the punctuation mentioned above; as long as the plot is good, that's all that matters. I've read over 100 chapters and am currently on the latest one, but it seems the author is just exploiting me. A plot that could be summarized in a few chapters is stretched into dozens. If it were free, I wouldn't complain, but now I'm paying for each chapter. Only high-quality content will attract readers. If one or two chapters are short, I'll assume it's due to a lack of writing ability, but every chapter is short. And you don't see the comments? Now, a few lines of dialogue constitute a whole chapter—everything to earn points, right...?

I've been wondering if the author actually typed it out. Maybe they used speech-to-text conversion? I think it's about 80% likely, since there are always typos and missing punctuation – definitely speech translation.

Why does the writing in the other book seem better than this one? Shouldn't it be by the same author?