
The Abyssal Witch Begins to Fall to Darkness
深渊魔女从黑化开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 6.1M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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The plot dragged on, and the emotional scenes were thrown in randomly; just like that, a beautiful day came to an end.
The way the angst was delivered was bizarre. If so much description was given to a family member, why kill them off? Was it just for the sake of making them dark? Light novels, light novels! If we're here to see the absurdity of reality, we'd be better off reading Lu Xun's articles or studying history. Goodbye, I originally came to read something heartwarming to relax, but after reading your so-called "healing," I feel like Yuzhang Academy desperately needs people like you—even if you can't deliver the angst quickly or well.
Author, is this Dan Baijia?
The story is finished!
I know why sometimes when watching "transformed loli" stories, something feels off. The protagonist seems to have regressed to a loli form, all their pre-transformation life experiences have vanished, causing them to act childishly and indecisively, even when they should be mature—they hesitate and dawdle over taking a disgusting pill.
After reading the brief reviews, I have serious doubts about the book's "healing" label.
Let's chat briefly.
The battle was dragged out far too long. What should have been a fast-paced plot was stretched out into an excessively drawn-out sequence. After the fight, they even gave their last words. Seriously, this supposed life-or-death battle felt like a theatrical performance. It was a battle, after all! Even if the opponent was an old acquaintance, there shouldn't have been a lengthy dialogue. Ellipses meant to indicate exhaustion were replaced with periods. It was so frustrating to watch. Besides, knowing the enemy might come looking for them, and knowing they were exceptionally powerful, the only effective defenses in the manor were the maids and knights. How much did they underestimate their opponent? You might say there were too few mages, magic circles were difficult to inscribe, and even if inscribed, they wouldn't work, or the magic circles were damaged by dragon breath...
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This... This number of words could probably fill a novel.
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To be honest, it has that meticulous, almost unbearable quality of older books like Wuthering Heights, and then there's that stereotypical, half-naive, cute little girl story. This combination is really strange, like eating something that smells amazing but turns out to be potato chips.