A Girl's Taciturn Tale

I've finished reading it, and there's not much to say. Those who know me understand that my book reviews don't involve unnecessary discussions; I get straight to the point. The following content might cause some emotional distress, so please read with caution. There are no insults; this is just a personal review based on the plot. As usual, it's out of ten points. Points are added for good aspects and deducted for bad ones, resulting in the final rating for the book. Good aspects: First, the story's transitions and plot details are quite good, the author's writing style is acceptable, and the narrative is smooth. Two points for this. Second, the subject matter is acceptable to me; as a long-time anime/manga enthusiast, I found it quite effective. Three points for this. Third, regarding the plot...

Well, there are just too many plot holes. The system's perpetual eighteen-year-old status from the very beginning was a trap. Then there were the later missions, including when Xiao Zhiyuan was trapped by Astaroth's treasure, which made it clear that the system was like an omniscient and omnipotent supreme being interfering with spacetime. And then there's Tianzaozi's Golden Core—it's never been revealed whose it is. While the Nascent Soul and Divine Transformation stages above the Golden Core correspond to the later power system, this is another type of immortal system for gods. It's a pity there was only one Golden Core and then it was gone. And what about Xiaoxiao's family and Xiao Zhiyuan's family? What happened back then? Who ultimately took the God's Wish? What kind of being is the senior student, and why can she...?

Kids, this is truly wonderful! The story flows smoothly throughout, and the ending is reasonable. The parts about family love in the middle moved me so much that my eyes got inflamed from crying. Thumbs up! Just keep reading!

A C-cup is a bit too big, isn't it? The character is supposed to be a cute loli, so why add half a watermelon to her bust?

Having read Chapter 60 of Volume 2, I have some thoughts to share, so I'm posting this comment. The content is rather subjective and might offend, so I apologize in advance. Some parts may not be clearly expressed, and there might be parts I've misremembered; please forgive me. The protagonist's character is quite interesting; he can't speak freely and can only communicate through writing. His daily interactions with the girls are also quite good, and this part deserves praise. However, the transitions between daily life and battles are generally very abrupt; it all seems to jump around abruptly. There might be a clap of thunder in the beginning, and then a battle starts. I didn't see the protagonist at all in several chapters. Although it seems like the purpose is to establish the world-building, but...

This is my first book review, written on a whim. I read the author's previous work from cover to cover; it's one of my favorites. I immediately finished the new one as well. Compared to the mature, older-sister-like heroine of the previous book, this one features a young girl, but she's equally virtuous, thrifty, and a money-grubber! (A plus!). Who wouldn't love a virtuous, money-grubberish young girl? (And a seasoned pro at it too!) I must say, I think the character development and inner thoughts in this book are better than the previous one (the celestial black hole part was hilarious!), And there are many fresh and imaginative ideas and well-placed references. Reading...

Oh. So you've forgotten about your brother's ending, haven't you?

Does this book have any angst? How intense is the angst? I won't even bother reading the angst-filled version.

This ending was terrible! Why didn't they continue? Honestly, this one was much better than the other one.

Because I came from Xia Liang's area, I only glanced at a few pictures and was deeply impressed.