Did the Frail, Beautiful Girl Have Tangerines Today?

At first glance, the writing was good, but the overall impression was poor. The older brother had too much screen time, and their intimate scenes were unsettling. While the author might have intended to portray the strong bond between siblings, a more balanced approach is needed in a yuri (lesbian) novel. Otherwise, it felt awkward, as if the older brother was the male lead. It might have been better if the older sister were the one to play the role.

So sweet! It would be even better if you could update ten million words a day!

Take a day off on the 31st.

This book has resumed updates. I am writing this review here, and it will continue until the book is finished.

Will there be any updates this month?

They set it up again?

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The protagonist's life is a bit tough; he has a congenital heart disease. I'd like to ask, if the protagonist and the female lead were to fight in bed, would it trigger his heart disease?

It's almost been a month.

With 670,000 words already, there's still not much progress; the pace is a bit slow. The author could try speeding up the pace.