I'm a Manga Artist, and My Fans Have Caught Me!

To put it simply, the strengths are good: the writing is decent, and the characters are charming and unique. However, the later parts seem to drag out the plot, with too little focus on driving the main storyline forward. Perhaps the slice-of-life scenes are too bland. The author may have taken someone's advice and added a strange world-building setting, leading to confusion in character roles. Overall, though, it's still quite entertaining. A major flaw is the inconsistent character personalities, especially the protagonist's sister's best friend, who starts off as a naive and honest girl but later becomes almost like a completely different person with a split personality. Other main characters also have similar issues. Character personalities are very important in a novel...

All I want to say is that everyone wants a green environment now, it's the same everywhere. I just want to laugh. They're just looking for trouble, otherwise, would they let you sit there and freeload? No way. They only get paid if they cause trouble. Now there's all sorts of crackdowns, many of my favorite novels are gone, and my favorite content creators have been banned. I just want to say they deserve to die a horrible death… I curse them for life… they're specifically targeting me.

I think this type of work is really well-written by the author, although it's not as exaggerated as the guy above said, that it's the first novel he'd be willing to pay for. Actually, I don't think it's necessary to be so serious about whether it's scientifically accurate; the novel's world-building already accounts for these inaccuracies. There are countless trolls who criticize the author's writing all day long; taking it too seriously is a losing proposition, author. I hope you continue to improve your writing. There's a saying: the more easily angered a person is, the more likely they are to fail; the less able a person is to control their emotions, the worse their character.

Author, do you really understand what a "king's return" means? A true king is one who is undefeated. You said you were going to write about Miki's triumphant return, but I haven't seen it at all. Nobody else knows, only people in Atsushi City know—is that what you call a king's return? Only one city in the entire Hokkaido knows—what kind of return to Hokkaido is that? Second, from Miki's terrible performance to his inability to turn things around, and then some incompetent guy trying to salvage the situation—is that what you call a king's return? Third, the whole volume is just people who know his sharpness talking nonsense, while those who don't know remain ignorant—is that what you call a king's return? Please explain your understanding of what a king is, and what a "return" means. You don't...

Dear President, I'm back again. I've been following this book ever since I first read it; it's the first book I've willingly paid for. However, the recent football match episodes have been a bit frustrating. It's not that Bai Sha is too weak or anything; as you said, Bai Sha has indeed been too strong. After all, he hasn't played football for so many years, and to turn the tide like that without any sport is quite impressive. I have no objection to that. But this is a novel, President, you shouldn't overthink it. Just focus on yourself...

I'm already fed up with Qian Die's performance; there are some chapters I don't even want to read anymore—they're frustrating. I initially really liked this book, and it's the one I started paying to read. But I don't want to read the latest volume anymore… I've been looking for other books since last month. It's not that this book is bad, it's just that the recent chapters are frustrating to read… Reading can be enjoyable, but everyone wants to have fun while reading. …If Qian Die continues like this, I'm giving up on following it too… Here's my monthly vote for you!

If only I had a few thousand subordinates, each copying a chapter, it would be done in an hour. Sigh, what a pity.

1. First of all, why is the male lead so fragile? He gets hospitalized from a simple fall. I've seen the female lead, who's sick, hospitalized, and feverish, apply medicine to the male lead, faint, get beaten up by her sister, and take a long time to recover. Is this necessary for the plot? 2. To be honest, I was drawn in by the first few chapters. I felt that the later chapters didn't have that same compelling feeling. There was a bit too much rambling. 3. Even so, the author's writing style and plot concept are still quite impressive. At least I couldn't write like that (I'm being arrogant again). Anyway, I hope the author can write something new and interesting. My allowance is very limited, and I need to use it to read Chinese light novels. TwT

This May, I wanted to read light novels, and a friend recommended this app to me. Curious, I opened it and saw this book on the popularity charts; its title and cover design were quite appealing. I clicked on it out of curiosity… and I was hooked. This is my first time writing a book review for this captivating novel (please forgive any shortcomings). Getting off-topic, let's talk about the plot first. From the somewhat unsuccessful "amusement park" storyline at the beginning to the excellent "Kyoto" storyline now, the author's writing style has matured from slightly immature at the beginning (perhaps they became more familiar with it as they wrote) to now being able to write a truly excellent story…

I genuinely hate Qian Die. She has absolutely no sense of propriety in her interactions with others. I won't even mention August Liu, and now this one's another. If I were Bai Sha, I wouldn't want her. I finally understand why so many people in the comments are dissatisfied. This girl isn't indecisive; she's far too opinionated. If we're talking about which female lead is fickle, she's definitely number one. Putting aside her poor judgment in relationships, her intelligence is questionable. First, when going out to meet someone at night, she always arrives so far in advance. Second, when encountering bad people, doesn't she know to ask for help from those around her? Regardless of whether anyone cares, she could at least shout for help. Finally, this feeling of being NTR'd over something so trivial is just like eating shit...