People filled the spacious conference room. At the very front sat a "white-haired little girl" in military uniform, clutching a bizarre rag doll and gazing at everyone with a look of satisfaction.
"I can't believe so much time has passed. You've all grown up," the girl sighed.
But why was my sworn older sister looking at me so intensely?
Why did my childhood friend look so satisfied?
And Teacher Ling, you're drooling!
A puppet's body, the eye of prophecy, the stomach of gluttony, and nine lives. "I am the strongest supernatural object," the girl declared with great authority. A harem power fantasy.
These are my personal opinions and suggestions.
Firstly, I haven't read many chapters of this book, just the first three golden chapters, so please forgive me if I'm wrong. 1. Weak Immersion: Immersion is a major issue. I don't know if you've ever experienced this, but when reading a novel you like, you unconsciously immerse yourself in it, sometimes even wondering what you would do if you were transported into the story and became the protagonist. That's immersion. Sometimes, immersion is a measure of a novel's quality. Because of the sexual violence mentioned earlier, which clashes with mainstream values (of course, some people might like this, but they are rare), the novel's immersion is very weak. My suggestion is to change sexual violence to abuse...
Wow, you're amazing! I didn't even dare to list it as a suspense film, I listed it as an urban film instead.
The author is back! I wonder if anyone's still reading.
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The writing is too superficial.
Can you keep going?
I have another bold idea: what if the uncle who imprisoned the protagonist before reappears as a strange being?
Ah, that's good.
They're gone.
Why does something seem off to me the more I look at it?