I Was Reincarnated as a Witch, and I Seem to Be a Little Too Powerful

My writing skills are indeed poor, and I haven't been able to overcome this flaw even after all these years. Therefore, I'll try my best to focus on the plot. If everyone thinks my stories are bad, then I might really be finished. To write this book, I was working on two projects simultaneously, squeezing in updates during my school days. It was truly exhausting, but thankfully everyone has been understanding, which makes me very happy. As for why it might definitely be my last book… that's not absolute. I still really enjoy this type of book. In conclusion, thank you all for your support. I know my writing isn't very good, but I hope you'll be forgiving…

The political content is written like this? If the author can't write well, they shouldn't write it at all; it lowers the overall quality of the book. For example, the description of Hell when Christina enters the scene is problematic. Even if a man nearing 50 lacks power, he should have experience; how could he be threatened by a little girl? This kind of war issue is written too childishly; the portrayal of Hell's reaction is truly ill-considered. Although I read this book just for fun, I hope the author can grasp basic logic. Building characters is fine, but don't sacrifice logic for storytelling.

Well, to be honest, I personally prefer yuri and pure romance novels, so when I saw the yuri aspect, I clicked on it. The beginning was alright, a standard loli-themed story that was quite enjoyable, and the slice-of-life scenes were also good. However, as the story progressed to the academy arc, I felt something was missing. Upon further reflection, I realized—the only real interaction between the protagonist and Ailu so far has been a few encouraging words exchanged when they first met. Later, their relationship seems stagnant, lacking any emotional connection, even in terms of inner thoughts. I think this is something worth noting; after all, just a few words of "I like you" are empty and completely insufficient...

Although it's a bit of a cast-off, it's practically finished now. As long as there aren't any sudden major discoveries or abrupt transitions into new worlds, it's basically complete. If you're looking for something to read, I still recommend checking it out.

I suddenly thought of this book today and decided to come back and take a look. I found that it had been updated, but it was ten months ago.

Sweep the graves of the eunuchs

Well, the rebirth method is relatively novel in SF's transformation novels, but after reading the second chapter, it felt very familiar. That's when I realized it's very similar to "The Reborn Hero's Daughter's Heroic Ambition to Become a Hero Again." I'm not sure if it was written using that as a template, but the writing style is average and needs improvement. If it wasn't a reference, I suggest the author take notes. The descriptions of the environment and details are rather weak and easily misunderstood. Most light novels nowadays tend to be fast-paced, and we don't have to accept all the audience's opinions. Sometimes, appropriate selection and borrowing are better. A slower pace isn't necessarily worse. Of course, the writing style can't be too much worse...

This update from the author is like a joke...

As long as this book isn't discontinued, it's fine.

Prepare the joss paper, incense, and offerings for tomb sweeping.