As a Villain, I Unwittingly Saved the Protagonists

To be honest, author, you need to distinguish between your inner thoughts and what you say, otherwise it makes me a little uncomfortable reading, and people with poor comprehension skills might not be able to tell the difference. Even I have some trouble distinguishing them. Hope this is helpful.

Punctuation is a major issue; it can be off-putting at first glance. With improved writing style and some clever integration and creation of new ideas later on, this unconventional genre, as long as it's not abandoned prematurely, should be able to achieve moderate success.

Didn't Lin Xinxue already know the protagonist's identity?

Punctuation is a major drawback, and the writing feels somewhat rambling. The drama and conflict are poorly developed, but otherwise, the premise is good, especially the opening scene where the undercover agent is discovered, which is a refreshing surprise. However, the lack of quotation marks in the dialogue significantly detracts from the reading experience and could easily deter readers.

I've read a few chapters, and the story is pretty good, but it feels a bit like a diary entry. It might be a writing style issue; I don't know what suggestions to give. Author, please take a look and see if you can improve it.

The main character dies and the story ends. Everyone should celebrate and move on.

I'll give you all my monthly passes next month if you don't abandon me.

There are quite a few typos, and the punctuation is also hard to read.

It's finally going to be available! I'd like to ask for a monthly pass.

I'm giving the author a thumbs up 🔪 😊