Tsk, how do I put this?
When she first transmigrated, she had a hard time getting used to being a woman, and the male lead acted like a decent person, too.
To avoid being killed off by the plot, she teamed up with the male lead, walking straight into a trap.
He was secretly planning: Nothing matters more than having a baby, taking care of the baby, and keeping my wife fed!!!
In the end, she was somehow thoroughly devoured, and the male lead showed his true colors. But after being tricked, she had quite a temper.
"So what if I make you mad? If you've got the guts, divorce me!!!"
"I don't have the guts..."
Him: My wife's mad again. Waaaaah.
The cultivation world: She's mad again. Waaaaah.
Super sweet in the later chapters!!!
When can I eat your Void Candy?
Towards the end of the book, I couldn't understand what it was about. The author's promised sweet moments were always mixed with strange things. So far, I haven't found any scenes describing the sweetness between the male and female leads, not even a hint of ambiguity. It's just the author's empty promises and empty sweetness keeping me hanging. The plot was supposed to have a great reveal of their identities, but it was abruptly ruined, can you believe it? Then the female lead does a series of actions, and the male lead actually tries to escape from her, and then she uses him as a tool? Author, I don't know what you're trying to say, I really can't understand what you're writing. The earlier scenes with Su Da and Zhuge Liang have a strong NTR (Netorare) vibe, just used to bring the male and female leads together...
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this book.
First, the male lead's introduction is somewhat delayed in the early stages, and the writing style is initially weak due to his newcomer status, though it's improving. Second, some historical figures are referenced, but these are meant as parodies and shouldn't be taken too seriously. Furthermore, the early plot serves as foreshadowing, and since the first volume just finished before the book's release, there's nothing the author can do if readers don't like it. The book's initial sales weren't great, and I'm writing it purely out of passion; I don't want it to flop. I know I can't compete with others in every way. But at least I can manage five chapters a day. That's all I have to say; I hope everyone enjoys reading it.
The beginning was quite awkward, highlighting the protagonist's lack of self-awareness and embarrassment regarding his own abilities.
Good subject matter
The writing style is lacking. While the author clearly tries hard to express certain things, there are obvious instances of over-expression or inaccurate expression. For example, the author uses the villain's own monologues to reveal information, attempting to flesh out the character. But is it really appropriate for these things to be "spoken" solely by the villain? First, it's important to understand that spoken words can be either "true" or "false." For instance, a villain might have a touching backstory, but if they inexplicably reveal it themselves, it's both untimely and inappropriate, diminishing the impact of even the most moving story. For example...
The book is alright, but the writing is lacking.
Honestly, the scene where Mu Qingcheng encounters Jia Ling after being rescued by Jia Fang made me uncomfortable. In that situation, a person would only have two thoughts: either this is a plan to help them escape, or it really is what it seems. But the female lead's reaction made me quite uncomfortable. Secondly, even now, while the female lead says she's adapting to being a woman, I didn't feel that adaptation very strongly towards the end. There was always a sense of detachment. But overall, though, it suited my taste.
This is outrageous; I died from the poison.
The work is actually quite good; it can't be that bad.
Because of the author's somewhat simplistic writing style, the beginning might not feel quite right, but that's what novels are all about—everyone starts from scratch. If you feel there's anything you don't like, feel free to tell the author; they'll definitely listen. This book is constantly evolving. Also, the author's use of historical figures is admittedly a bit lazy; a completely fictional world would have been better. However, the text repeatedly mentions "the mortal realm," so using historical figures is probably to emphasize that.
It's alright.
I felt a bit awkward; the author kept contradicting their own established plot points, especially the Zhuge Liang section. Even the protagonist noticed something was off, so how could Zhuge Liang, whose intelligence is supposedly so high, not know? Also, how did the character who kept saying he wasn't very capable suddenly become a grandmaster? Overall, though, it was okay, not too bad, as long as you don't focus too much on the details. Maybe I just haven't read to the end. Anyway, back to reading! 😂😂😂😂😂
Didn't the author say it was pure love with no NTR? I haven't seen any romance yet, but I'm about to lose control of my killing spree.
Chapter 1 has bugs.
The first chapter has a bug (I've only read eight chapters, so please forgive me if I'm wrong). In the first chapter, the author initially emphasizes that the protagonist's online game character before his transmigration was the villain's beloved wife, whom he was obsessed with and fond of; however, after transmigrating, the villain's beloved wife turns out to be an ugly woman. Firstly, considering the online game the protagonist played before his transmigration, the fact that the villainous female supporting character could exist as a game character, and that the protagonist could like her and spend money on her, suggests she couldn't be too ugly. It's possible she was ugly before the game's main plot began, but became beautiful afterward, which is where the bug appears. After the protagonist transmigrates, the system also...