My In-Game Girlfriends Always Want to Conquer Me

This is my first book review, so I'm a little nervous. I found this book on the homepage. Actually, I don't really like writing book reviews, posting updates, or complaining; I just enjoy reading quietly. But after seeing this author's book, I don't know why I couldn't help but write a review. This is my first time posting on Pineapple Bun, haha. Anyway, let's get straight to the point. The reading experience was okay, but the writing style felt a bit soft. Could the author be a girl? Hhhhh. I don't mean to belittle the writing; the plot is fairly well-structured, but the pacing feels a bit off...

Let me share my thoughts after reading seven chapters. First, the protagonist's character. As someone who has struggled for ten years in a post-apocalyptic world, the protagonist's personality is still like that of a teenager, creating a significant sense of inner conflict. The author needs to improve in developing the protagonist; in this regard, I suggest learning from classic works. Generally, classic works have excellent character development, like Quasimodo in *The Hunchback of Notre Dame*, whom you'll always remember. Second, the plot. Good novels usually have ups and downs to achieve success, but this novel is too bland, failing to capture the reader's attention from the beginning. Looking at the previous plot points—rebirth—job change—saving the girl—temple cheat—...

Happy New Year everyone! It's such a shame this book is gone; I read it for so long.

What's going on? Tagging and asking for favorites in every comment? Instead of writing a proper book, you're resorting to crooked and unorthodox methods? Do you really think I'm easy to bully?

While visiting the grave, I told the author that the book was actually very well written, but the beginning wasn't particularly good, which is why many people didn't read to the end. I hope you'll come back someday and continue writing; I read to the very end.

Dumplings

This book is really good, why aren't you updating it anymore?

Abandoned?

Rua dumplings~

It's not necessarily going to be abandoned! I hope the author can come back soon. I've been following it since it was first released, it's very interesting, and the plot is great. I look forward to your return, hooray! But hey, please finish the second volume first... You should at least finish the tournament... Don't suddenly stop updating like this...