I'm Just Eating You, So Please Don't Make It So H

Regarding this review, let me first state my basic principles. Firstly, I evaluate the article based on the author's competence and the novel's issues. If you're just writing for fun, you can just skim through it. Secondly, every word in this review is an expression of love for Dana-sama. So, let's begin. "The giant had a wiry appearance and brown hair and beard, with a mixed Caucasian and Asian look in his brows." This is inappropriate wording. "Wiry appearance" is inappropriate; "brows" should convey more of an air of refinement, not race. "One of them was a beautiful, waist-length black girl with a sword in a single ponytail." While this isn't technically wrong, it affects the flow of the text. Because...

New Year's Day Special - "Eating H" and the Real World (A Long Review That's Not Quite a Long Review) Hello everyone, I'm Phantom Lightning, who's extremely bad at self-introductions, so I'll skip that. If you've been paying attention to the book's comment section, you've probably seen my name there. As for my identity, you can think of me as Snowman-kun's friend and editor. Taking advantage of New Year's Day, and also to warm up for the upcoming fourth volume, I'll talk about the behind-the-scenes story of "Eating H" in the real world. The Birth of "Eating H" Attentive readers have probably already noticed that, besides this work...

Please don't make it so H when you're just eating me. Reviewer: Charlotte (Light Novel Review, please do not give monthly tickets) Topological psychology studies the psychological satisfaction of humans. One extremely important experiment in this field involves ordering a child to do something, then forcibly stopping them. After the first order is stopped, they are then given a similar task. After completing the second task, the child's emotions are analyzed. The results show that mentally mature children experience less of a sense of accomplishment from completing the second task compared to the disappointment of not completing the first, while mentally immature children cannot...

This time it's just out of boredom. It's fine if I don't read Snowman's stories, because I don't know how much I can write. I really like Snowman's stories, not because of his writing style or how beautiful the stories are, but simply because I like them. It's strange, it's lonely, I just like watching Qianlian, the character Snowman portrays, strive in the story, I just like his kindness. Watching Qianlian feels like seeing my younger self. However, Qianlian is braver than me and has more dreams. The first time I read Snowman's stories, I just thought they were interesting and fun. So when did I start liking Qianlian, this child, striving for his treasure? When did I become...

I read this book in junior high school, but stopped because of the high school entrance exam. Now, with the college entrance exam approaching, I suddenly remembered it and searched through my library for a long time before finally finding it. It turns out the book hasn't been updated in a long time. I don't know if the author will ever return, but I hope that if they do, they might see this comment and know that someone is always waiting for them to come back. [Em: sfgirl:]

Actually... I really wanted to complain about the lewd things the rabbit said to Saki... But never mind... [PS: Total score 10, 7 points] Overall: 1. The plot is full of twists and turns, which is indeed a standard formula, but this kind of formula gets tiresome after a while. The protagonist's endless overpowered abilities are something to be mindful of, even though it's supposed to be a training ground. -0.5 Points 2. I just don't really like harem stories. If it's going to be a harem story, I hope everyone has their own story. -0.5 Points 3. Although the story is well-written and you, Snowman, have clearly practiced, rhetoric alone is useless...

Come home often, come home often

I... After searching through countless books for ages, I finally found this book... Only to find out it hadn't been updated for two years?

On the anniversary of Wong Ka Kui's death, I also paid my respects to the author.

Dear author, I have a question. The battle against the Undead King exposed various fantastical elements to the surface world. More than the protagonists' battles, I'm also interested in how the author plans to depict the surface world's reaction. After all, this kind of inter-species war is practically equivalent to an alien invasion, enough to unite nations and lead to actions that profoundly change the world, resulting in an epic historical drama. So, the question is, if the author focuses on the surface world's response, the original purpose of the story (a romantic comedy about fighting and girls) might be diluted. But if the author ignores the surface world and focuses solely on the protagonists' story, it feels like an ostrich burying its head in the sand...