I'm Doted on by Beautiful Girls from Both Sides of Good and Evil for Running a General Store
开杂货店的我被正反派美少女宠溺
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 520k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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289Chapters
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2.2kLikes
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I couldn't fit my short review here, so I had to come here.
Dear author, I'd like to offer a suggestion. While the "mindset-based thinking" aspect is indeed fun and enjoyable occasionally, it gets quite boring if it's all the time. You must find the mental process quite tiring to come up with (I know it's not easy, I've tried it myself, though it was terrible). However, if you get tired of writing, the reader will find the repetitive nature tedious, which is counterproductive. I suggest adding some other elements. So far, I feel like more than half of the book focuses on the psychological process of mindset-based thinking. It's certainly interesting, but it's easy to get tired of reading it. Most people might approach it with a sense of fun, but you need to consider the connections between different elements...
Canned food is awesome!
The subject matter was good, but the plot was a bit simplistic, which was a pity.
1. I started reading "The General Store" last winter break. From the initial story of selling magic orbs to the later tale of borrowing the Holy Sword, it was quite good. However, the plot became a bit lengthy after Liu Qianmei's appearance, and the formula became slightly less satisfying. (｡•́•̀｡) 2. Later, during the sibling arc, I started reading more. I personally think the sibling arc was better than the earlier ones (I wasn't very optimistic about the casino plot; many descriptions were superfluous). But the same problems resurfaced later on. (｡•́•̀｡) 3. The battles with the holy beasts, including the appearance of the Demon Princess, felt somewhat forced. The vast Demon City seemed very small. The author...
How come other authors get Yan Di monthly tickets as soon as they release their books, but I haven't seen many? Is this what a failed author is like?
It's quite good, why isn't it being updated?
There are people with worse grades than you who are crawling on the ground and struggling hard. Your books are not bad, so why do you want to give up your dreams?
You said you didn't plan to keep this book until the New Year, does that mean you'd just abandon it altogether?
Indeed, the new book is vastly different from this one; the new book is much better.
Hand the big shot an air monthly pass
Author, if you release less than ten chapters in a row, I'll just have to punish you. After all, I'm not some kind of devil.