
After Leaving the Mountains, I Became Invincible, but the Fairies Took Advantage of Me
出山后无敌的我吃了仙子们的亏
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 242k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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114Chapters
1.6MClicks
10.4kFavorites
6.7Score
1.2kLikes
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It's not what I expected. The homepage clearly showed "After Leaving the Mountain, I Became Invincible and Ate the Fairy," so why are there three extra words after clicking in?
And isn't there anything else you're describing?
Ever since that little girl appeared, is that all the adjectives you have? If you can't describe her, don't use them. Just gloss over it with something like "pretty" or "looks good." Using the same phrase every time is making readers want to vomit. If you really can't think of anything else, then don't write. It feels like you're just padding the word count. And other things, the male lead's lechery is okay, but his attitude towards handling things is terrible. He said he'd teach her a lesson, but then he held back. Lions aren't afraid of mosquito bites, but they'll still swat a few times if they get annoyed. But you, you only act when someone's completely overbearing. It's really annoying. It's just a monotonous, rambling account. If you're going to talk about love, then talk about love...
The main character's personality is poorly developed.
Honestly, this protagonist's lecherousness is one thing, but his problem-solving skills are just too idiotic. It's like, if you annoy me, I'll do the opposite. You want me to break off the engagement? I won't. You won't become my disciple? I'll take you in! I just want to disgust you, without any self-respect. Is this protagonist a three-year-old? Instead of directly slapping you in the face when insulted, he insists on dealing with it in a disgusting way. Does this protagonist really have no self-respect? You're supposed to be a powerful, overpowered protagonist, but you act like a thug, without a shred of pride. To be honest, the part about breaking off the engagement was somewhat acceptable, but the part where he insists on taking you in as a disciple is just...
Short and weak
The author can write whatever they want, and it's none of your business to tell them what to do.
The compressed name made me think it was about someone who went down the mountain and ate a fairy.
Is this a side effect of rushing to finish? Just write slowly, as long as you don't have to supervise it.
Ah, I thought it was something like "After Leaving the Mountain, I Became Invincible and Ate the Fairy" or something, but it's boring.
One update a day? You're not stupid, but I'm going crazy!
I'll give it a full five stars, okay? Hahaha
If you don't like it, then don't watch it. Seriously, I laughed. This bunch of people are just ridiculous. (The following is just filler text.) I wondered what was happening there. I hurried to go there to take a look. I ran quickly. To my surprise, there was a girl sitting in the street. The girl with a scho...