The Otherworldly Demon Lord and His Fallen Witches

Hooray! It's finished! ･ﾟﾟ･(/ω\)･ﾟﾟ･. Authors who've been waiting for it to be fully released can now enjoy it!

While the author intended to portray a down-to-earth, approachable, and tolerant demon king—perhaps this creates a contrast—the demon king completely loses the most basic dignity he should possess. Being kind to everyone when his identity is hidden is fine, but acting like a sixteen or seventeen-year-old teenager after revealing it is absurd. Therefore, the sense of immersion isn't very strong. Furthermore, the protagonist's invincibility isn't clearly demonstrated. While it certainly follows the "overpowered protagonist" trope, depicting more of the female lead's behavior and how she seduces the demon king easily creates a sense of imbalance, especially considering it's a male-oriented novel.

Overall, the author's writing style is somewhat immature, but the narrative ability is quite strong. I believe many readers, like myself, felt that the Demon King didn't quite fit the mold, and the witch didn't quite fit the character. Since they have a superior-subordinate relationship, it should be portrayed more clearly. I think you could learn a thing or two from Maruyama's *Overload*, and also from *Aspiring to Become a Kage*. Another point is that the sense of swagger isn't strong enough. The novel's setting is good, but the immersion isn't great; the protagonist's description isn't detailed enough, giving it an unrealistic and ambiguous feel. Despite having the label of invincible, it doesn't quite radiate the true essence...

I have to catch a flight tomorrow, so I'll be updating during the day. Get some rest, everyone!

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I was out all day yesterday, so I'll make up for it with two updates today.

*Sobbing* I was arrested this afternoon and evening, so updates will have to be delayed.

My new book is scheduled for release this winter!

Are you buying them all, Bao? It's been a long time since I've checked.

Goodness, it's almost finished after a month or two of not watching!