How Could a Corrupted Fairy Ever Kill Me, the Protagonist?

Damn it, I gave you monthly tickets, I gave you high stars, I didn't care if you skipped updates, and I even helped you when people criticized you. Your book was really good back then, I really liked it. It was also my first book on Pineapple Bun, and you almost guessed all my preferences, so I planned to follow it until the end. But what happened? Now, after half a year of waiting, there are only fifty-something chapters! When I see people saying you never update, they criticize you, but instead of reflecting on your own behavior, you think they have a problem. Do you even deserve that? I'm the first person I've ever seen fans begging for updates, pleading for updates, dropping the rating from 8.9 to 7.8. You're really something.

As a moderate yandere enthusiast, the author's depiction of Ling Xianzi's emotional changes is undeniably excellent. From her initial icy indifference to her satisfying and exhilarating transformation into a villain, it's incredibly engaging, making me increasingly eager for the four-part Bai Yixian. However, when appreciating excellent works, a critical attitude is often necessary. Here, I'd like to offer some personal opinions: the male protagonist's characterization lacks finesse. Serious transmigration novels generally have two types of protagonists: the overpowered protagonist and the ordinary protagonist. One type starts with a self-centered narrative of "thirty years east of the river, thirty years west of the river; what do I care about the lives and deaths of ordinary people?" This type of protagonist has very little charm and is essentially just a satisfying read. The other type is the protagonist...

The author treats readers like fools. Since I started following the story in February, the promise of double updates has never been fulfilled, yet the author keeps lying to readers for monthly votes. In March, they promised double updates in April, but broke their promise on the very first day of April. Then, they suddenly said they'd work extra hard on Labor Day in May and update double updates for the entire month. But Labor Day, such a perfect day to compensate readers, and they broke their promise on the very first day of May. Then, at the end of May, they lied to readers again, saying double updates in June. At that point, I knew they were lying to us. If you can't work hard on Labor Day in May, how can you possibly work hard during exam week in June? They completely treat readers like fools, with no sense of shame whatsoever. Four consecutive months of promises broken, four consecutive months of disappointment for readers...

First of all, I must give it a perfect score. The author's writing style is average, but the subject matter is fantastic, and the early parts are quite enjoyable, though occasionally it feels like reading a diary. The female lead's fanservice is a bit lacking, but since the Yun Meiniang volume, the author's tendency to drag out the plot has become increasingly obvious. It's not entirely about padding the word count, but rather a lack of focus, constantly wasting words on unimportant scenes and supporting characters (everyone's here for the female lead! Humph!). If the author runs out of material in the middle, they could focus more on the daily lives of the male and female leads, adding some sweet moments. It's much better than using two or three chapters to describe a plot that could be covered in one chapter; it really affects the book's quality. I previously...

I discovered this book in the summer of 2020 and immediately became hooked. I personally thought it was quite good, and it was updated almost daily back then. Now it's the summer of 2023, three years later. If my memory serves me right, the second major chapter ended in 2020. Then I neglected it for over two years, thinking I could finally catch up and read it all, but after all these years, only a few dozen chapters have been released. It's truly frustrating. I really love this book and really want to continue reading, watching Bai Yixian grow, but if the author is being irresponsible, then please stop dragging it out. Make an announcement to let us know, and stop torturing us and Bai Yixian...

Brothers, you can stop reading after the first part of the story is finished. The second part is barely acceptable, but the later parts are padded and contain many clichéd plot points. The author started to fall apart in the later part of the second part, and the third part is just a complete letdown. He makes many excuses for not updating. Actually, he can just say so when he can update regularly. There's no need for a bunch of excuses. We can write an ending for Bai Yixian's story ourselves. There's no need to torture us, ourselves, and Bai Yixian like this.

No, you don't even update, yet you're participating in the preliminary rounds.

In short, if you have plenty of coins and time to spare, check it out. The plot is really too slow, with only a few climaxes, making the drawn-out story feel bloated and unpleasant. Think of it this way: 200 chapters, two climaxes, and that's it—it's just too padded. The author's writing style is alright, but the content is the main problem! If you changed your habit of padding your writing, you might get a higher score. If you lack inspiration, you don't have to write, you know? If you think I'm wrong, feel free to disagree; the comments section is waiting for you.

I have a fever again, and I feel dizzy and unwell. I need to take another day off.

Overall, it was quite exciting. But honestly, one update a day is too little. Not enough! ╮(￣▽￣"")╭ Actually, the so-called "dragging" or "filler" plot is wrong. The setup is for the plot's plausibility. It's not that everything is forced to be plausible just because you're the protagonist, but rather that it's logical and consistent with common values. This is especially important in the emotional aspect; without the establishment of everyday emotions, it becomes superficial. Illogical emotions don't feel satisfying because you don't understand why she turns evil, or what reasons she has for turning evil. Turning evil is because you like her so much, and that liking comes from the narrative setup. In my opinion, what everyone calls "dragging" plot is a misconception...