As a Sparrow, I’m Doted on by My Sect

He is seriously ill, but his return will surely come; do not worry.

This is a novel I read today, and judging from the title, it's a breath of fresh air in the SF (fantasy/martial arts) genre. From the title, we can tell it's a Xianxia (fantasy/martial arts) story. Below is a further analysis. First, the rating: Writing Style ★★★☆☆ Worldview ★★★★☆ Plot Highlights ★★★★☆ Character Design ★★★★☆ The writing style isn't top-tier at first glance, but it's still excellent. It uses many references and memes, and the timing is just right, giving the reader a strong sense of participation. Although the early chapters are a bit disorganized, and many names appear at once, making it slightly difficult to follow the plot, it's worth noting that the narrative from chapter ten onwards is much more engaging than the beginning...

Awooo, trying to come back to life, is there any hope?

The Million-Dollar Novel

This novel, "Little Sparrow," was recommended to me by someone. After reading it, I decided to leave this review to encourage this new author. To be frank, this novel has many problems. Relying solely on the novelty of the subject matter might not make it a very strong book, but it does have its merits. I should mention that, as a first-time author, I think it's commendable that the author clearly understands the positioning of their work. Although each chapter is short, they all contribute to advancing the plot. In writing, the first priority is to tell a story, and then consider how to tell it well. The opening narrative...

The little sparrow evolves, and the pigeon monster appears... Awooooo~~

The author is sick; there will be an update tomorrow.

My brief review was deleted, so I'll write a longer one. I'm a science and engineering major, so I don't know anything about writing books, but at least I'm a reader, and I think I have the right to comment. I did read the book, and it's similar to other books written by middle school students on this site—a lot of self-indulgent rambling and unclear logic. For example, in Chapter 39, "A Sea of Flowers in Rain," the protagonist thinks her skirt is too long and cuts it off, "her steps unconsciously stopping." Cutting the skirt happens during the previously mentioned act of moving around, including making a peace sign and comfortably squinting her eyes. This truly overturned my understanding of logic and life. I won't give any more examples (if you want...).

The theme is quite novel. I've seen stories about reincarnation as dragons, snakes, and vines, but reincarnation as a sparrow is a first. I was drawn in by the title; the "h" must be the character for "living." The overall writing is quite delicate, with well-developed emotional descriptions and ample psychological portrayal. However, the overall plot feels rather bland, lacking any particularly funny moments or exciting climaxes. I finished it in one go, and it felt very uneventful—yes, I finished it. There were no particularly memorable highlights, only a general impression. The highlight of "Battle Through the Heavens," for example, is the phrase "Thirty years east of the river, thirty years west of the river; don't underestimate a young man's potential"—I still remember that line years later...

Please take one day off.