What's It Like to Have Your Apprentice Frantically Trying to Marry You?

Soon you'll see a bunch of comments like "No money," "Student," and "See you again someday."

What kind of garbage did you write after it was released? The beginning was okay, but it got worse and worse as you read on. Playing the fool to fool others isn't written like this. If you keep playing the fool, you'll actually become a fool. And do you even know what "a saint cannot be insulted" means? Can a true immortal have such a good temper? Did you cultivate by eating shit? I hope you don't make such low-level, idiotic mistakes in the future.

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There's a saying that goes, "Life isn't as dramatic as a novel; it's mostly mundane." Conversely, a novel shouldn't be as mundane as life, but rather full of ups and downs. This novel's opening is somewhat interesting: unable to ascend to the immortal realm, and unable to use his powers recklessly because he needs to avoid his female disciple, a lowly assassin stumbles into an immortal's pharmacy. This opening could be written as a grand and epic tale of cultivation, since the very question of why one can't ascend to the immortal realm is intriguing, much like the various strange and fantastical stories in classical Chinese mythology. Or you could easily turn it into a slice-of-life palace intrigue...

The subject matter was poorly chosen. The plot development was also bad. The character design was mediocre. First of all: the protagonist, a powerful figure, almost ascended to the celestial realm at the beginning, which means he's invincible in the mortal world. His disciples are all powerful figures. And an immortal is still so greedy for money. What's the use of money in the celestial realm? If it were truly useful, he could have robbed the mortal world before ascending. Then, an assassin comes and breaks into your house. Then, someone who looks like a mortal says a few words and you're forced to work for him for a hundred years. Are you dreaming? Being an assassin is illegal. The normal thought is to keep running. What does it matter to me if your house is destroyed? I'm already being lenient by not killing you (not allowing mortals to provide information, hiding oneself...).

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The subject matter is good, and the writing is decent, but the character development is somewhat underdeveloped. However, the biggest drawback lies in the poorly planned plot development, which lacks coherence. So, as readers progress, they might wonder: "Huh? What's the point of his/her appearance at this point?" In other words, many potentially rich sections are omitted. This aligns with the fast pace of modern novels, but it also causes discomfort for some readers. As the title suggests, everything is ready except for the final touch; if the plot can be developed, it will be a masterpiece. But some things are like painting; if the first stroke is wrong, the rest is a mess.