My Obsessive Girlfriend Is Still by My Side

The theme is novel and the content is rich. However, it can be uncomfortable to read at times. Reading it from the perspective of a minor character can be quite unpleasant. The chapters are rather short, and sometimes I genuinely worry about the male lead's intelligence. Also, his character is very vague; he dies once and then seems perfectly fine, which is ridiculous. Compare that to Lin Ze's novel, which mainly revolves around finding the female lead. The general plot is: the male lead revives, a bunch of women revolve around him, he searches for the female lead, he deduces and conjectures, and then there's a twist leading to his death. I initially came for the yandere aspect, and after reading one chapter, it seemed okay...

The male lead's tension really made me tense too, and now I'm a bit wary of the name "Xiao Ning." But one thing I'm confused about is why Xiao Ning knows who the male lead is, but he doesn't (it might be mentioned, but I just didn't see it). Overall, it feels a little far-fetched. Like all protagonists in wish-fulfillment novels, the male lead attracts all sorts of girls, and in such a noisy environment, I couldn't possibly tell who Xiao Ning was. There's also a bit too little mystery, but the male lead is written like a normal person, so his reasoning ability is similar to mine, which is understandable. However, I hope the author can add more mystery details in the future and perhaps introduce a twist...

The DNA is moving! It's comparable to "My Yandere Sister Loves Me to Death"—ah, I really love yandere characters!

Overall, the book is passable, but the world-building isn't very well developed; it feels stiff and a bit awkward to read. Honestly, the chapter about the old man was a complete disaster—a sudden, explosive explosion. The author wanted a major plot twist, but did they have to go that far? And if you're going to write about an old man, fine, but what the hell is this "protective charm" stuffed with...? Doesn't it feel a bit nauseating? The author's intentions are good; I think if they had deleted that section, it would have been a decent, albeit not great, work.

My goodness, it's a book from 2020! Time flies! It's been two years already. When I suddenly saw this book, I thought I had read it just a few days ago.

Author, have you read the novel "The protagonist is loved to death by his yandere younger sister (did he think he could escape by reincarnation, brother?)"?

This is a really good book; I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and highly recommend everyone read it as soon as possible (you know what I mean). I've only read half of it, and the plot feels very fresh. For me, this is a very good way to write a yandere (obsessive/obsessive) story. I really like it and highly recommend it. The main character is also very well-developed. I was even a little tense while reading. The character of Xiao Ning is very well-developed. Xiao Ning is too familiar with the male lead. Actually, each rebirth could have been longer; the first rebirth was a bit short, and the game ended too quickly. I hope the author can maintain this high standard, avoid padding, and not leave too much buildup, so the later chapters can't keep up...

From the chapters I've read so far, the author's skill in pacing and plot design is excellent; it's tense and captivating. Regarding why Xiao Ning always recognizes the protagonist before him, I think the author could experiment with writing side stories from Xiao Ning's perspective (contrasting perspectives would be very interesting and could enrich the characters). For someone like Xiao Ning, who has become somewhat pathological, it's easy to develop a kind of intuition when you care about someone. This intuition also exists in the real world, it's hard to explain (a woman's sixth sense? Perhaps), but Xiao Ning's is even stronger. She's particularly familiar with someone because of their speaking style, subtle details...

The author was in a car accident and passed away a year ago.

The author took too much risk with the second volume, actually using an old woman (was this your initial idea? If so, then you're brilliant in a positive and certain sense). But I think this is still too heavy-handed. Wouldn't it be better to use a little girl as a counterattack? But... It almost made me lose my erection.