My Wife Is the Future Demon Lord

Foreword: 1. I'm writing this review simply to point out some plot issues with the author. 2. This review only addresses the plot, not the author's character. 3. Criticism and corrections are welcome. Discussing the plot issues inevitably leads me to mention the author's previous book, *Ascension Begins with Raising a Fairy*. In that book, the female protagonist suffers terribly. First, there's Bai Ling'er, who is abused from the start, constantly pranked by the male lead, used as a target and bait in fights. Even more ridiculous is that she falls for the male lead; I think this might be Stockholm syndrome...

Weekly updates and so many people are still using monthly tickets? Anyway, even if you vote, the author still won't update. This relationship is so short-lived, I think it's time to go to a graveyard. I'll save my monthly tickets to reward authors who consistently update. No matter what's going on with the author, I'll stick to my "no updates, no monthly tickets" principle to the end.

From the very beginning, we know the female protagonist will become the Demon Lord. Given this background, and considering a child typically starts remembering things around age six, she should be more mature than her peers, more sensitive to her surroundings, more cautious, and understand more. She should also be someone who doesn't trust anyone and whose natural talents are likely lacking. However, the female protagonist's trust in the male protagonist develops too quickly, completely failing to reflect the characteristics of a sensitive young girl. Furthermore, becoming the Demon Lord requires either an unyielding spirit or immense ambition. Therefore, the discrepancy between the world-building and the character's portrayal is too great, making the character development in this work feel flawed. But keep it up...

All I want to say is, get lost! If you even had a leave request, you wouldn't be this annoyed.

This is my first time writing a book review, so please be gentle with your criticism. I've read a few of the author's other books, but they generally had issues with the later parts or character development. This one is different; the plot really suits my taste. I hope the sweet and tragic moments are proportional later on, and that they don't force-feed me awful plot holes. A good book is one that leaves plot holes unresolved. I'm writing this review now because the book is relatively new, and I hope it gets better with each installment. Also, please don't link it to any other books; I dropped my last book because of that, and that book just vanished!!!

This is my first time writing a book review, so please be gentle if there are any problems. I've read two of this author's books before (though I haven't finished them). The author's character descriptions and attention to detail are quite good, and the overall story flows smoothly. Since I haven't finished my previous books, I don't know if the author has a tendency to create weak endings, but I won't go into that. However, the storytelling ability is undeniable, so I couldn't help but click on the new book. The title is quite ordinary in the current market, nothing particularly outstanding, so I initially just treated it as a casual read, like any other novel of its kind. But even the first few chapters gave me a feeling that was different from other similar works...

It was interesting at first, but I couldn't stand it when it got to the sect part. They say the protagonist has memories of his past life, but he knows nothing about it, remembers nothing. He doesn't recognize his senior uncles or aunts, nor their disciples. He doesn't know anything about the competitions, and he doesn't recognize the people taking the exams. Could the author please add a setting where the protagonist only remembers parts of the story? It's so frustrating to watch. I try to ignore it every time, but it happens so many times, and he keeps saying he's a reincarnated person, deliberately reminding me of his past life.

In terms of writing style alone, I think the author is absolutely on par with some top-tier authors. The plot and overall vision are excellent, the logic is sound, and the power levels aren't overly exaggerated—it doesn't involve characters from vastly different skill levels beating each other. As a seasoned bookworm, I haven't read such a good fantasy novel in a long time. If you enjoy fantasy and cultivation novels, you'll definitely love this one. Judging from the early writing alone, it could easily be in the top 10 of online novel rankings.

I misjudged it. The beginning was good, but the rest was just filler and there was no more updates. Goodbye!

You thought you were visiting the author's grave? Actually, the author updated the ending and then visited your grave. This is hilarious!