My name is Li Guanyuan. When I was born, the heavens and earth showed strange signs, and I was born supreme. I have a beautiful master who has raised me for seventeen years. I'm attracted to her, so I have to work hard to win her over.
"Get lost! I've raised you for so long, so why are we still master and disciple... Where did things go wrong?"
"Could it be that this rebellious disciple isn't attracted to me?"
"Thirty years east of the river, thirty years west of the river. Don't bully..."
"Martial Ancestor? I'm the Devil Ancestor."
"Who dares claim they can't be defeated? Who dares claim they're invincible?"
As the three girls standing before me said this, each gripping my collar, I began to realize just how serious the situation was.
Tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw away
The plot is too arrogant and cheesy, making it bland yet difficult to discard. It has cultivation elements, but the descriptions are too sparse. There's no plot, no magical treasures, no elixirs, no battles, no competitions—it's practically nonexistent. There's no emotional development either. As the title suggests, it's a poorly written romance story. Just read it casually; I think it could be much more interesting with some minor revisions. The characters could be more distinctive…it lacks soul. The female lead's character is unlikable. The harem plot is unclear. There are few chapters that drive the plot forward. Seriously, is there even a plot? This feels a bit padded; I usually skip around because there's not much of a plot. I just read what I want to read. Sigh…
Why isn't it pure love?
From the interactions between Li Guanyuan and his master earlier, I felt it had a certain charm. But then Qin Yuhan suddenly appeared, which was quite absurd. It's one thing to use the same template as in *Battle Through the Heavens*, but then she inexplicably went shopping once and is now being added to the harem? It felt very abrupt, especially since Xiao Yan's image in *Battle Through the Heavens* is so deeply ingrained. This sudden change felt strange. (There's another novel, something like *Saint*, which included a plot similar to *Dragon Raja*, that also left me speechless. Is this the new trend for writing mixed elements?) Actually, the author's skill is very good, and the original plot is quite engaging, but the direction of the later plot doesn't quite suit my taste. Oh well, see you again sometime.
The last few dozen chapters I read were very depressing.
Well, to put it simply, Li Guanyuan seemed quite aggrieved in these past few dozen chapters. Whether it was being framed or the people around him, the pressure on him was immense, even bordering on pathetic, which made the reader very uncomfortable. He himself was constantly running away, and I felt that seeing him vent later, or perhaps even undergo a period of darkness, would make the story more enjoyable for the readers. Of course, this is just my personal opinion; the author might have something interesting planned later. If the author does pay attention, I really hope they give Li Guanyuan some space to vent, or even better, allow him to go through a period of darkness.
Sigh, to be honest, I come here often to check, and I sincerely hope the author won't give up. There are probably many people like me waiting for your updates. I don't know if the author can see this, but please keep going and don't give up on yourself.
Another movie where three girls are pursuing each other.
After watching for a while, to be honest, I really like the Li Guanyuan and his master pairing, but I have little interest in those three who are just there for show. There was no emotional foundation to begin with, yet they forced it together, dragging the master's storyline to give those three a higher status. My values are fairly normal; if it weren't for the master, I would accept it, but they had to add a third. It would have been better if it had an ending like "Once Upon a Time There Was a Spirit Sword Mountain." The master is so good, why did they have to find those three little brats? The author is definitely a pedophile, a real-life example.
It feels like the character designs are all changing.
While there were some fan service moments in the beginning, it still leaned towards *my heart belongs to my master*, maintaining a somewhat upright and gentlemanly tone. However, in the later chapters, he started losing control of this and that, proving that he didn't cherish his master once he got him. Although it's a harem novel, there should still be a process of emotional development, right? He simply went from a principled person to someone who fell into low-level pleasures—just an old lecher, huh! The protagonist? No way, no way, the protagonist wouldn't actually turn into a harem, would he?
Just look at the beginning; there's no need to look at the end.
Intentionally making your crush jealous in hopes of gaining attention is the most foolish method. If the author has never been in a relationship, they should go and have one first. Also, if you can't write a dark side, don't just write it randomly. It's really stupid to lure every monster and demon into a dark side. The beginning was quite good, but the later parts were purely for padding the word count. It's 2021 already, why are people still using jealousy to develop a romantic storyline? A Renaissance? Author, if you're out of things to write, just end it already. There's really no need to pad the rankings like that.
Let yyds release some pressure.
I've reached a point in the latest volume where the younger sister seems to have turned evil (?), And I feel like YYDS (the author) is really suffering. He's always taking the blame. I genuinely can't imagine what it would be like if someone in real life, a kind and innocent person, was falsely accused and constantly blamed, with everything being their fault. Wouldn't they break down? I really feel for YYDS; I'm begging for a plot twist that allows him to release some of that pressure, to let the world know about his frustration and pain. Otherwise, it's truly frustrating (maybe it's because I personally like to project myself onto the characters in the book or treat them as real people).
The beginning was not perfect, but the rest was very exciting.
Ahem, this is my first time writing a book review, so please forgive me if it's not well-written. To be honest, I was shocked when I read about Xiao Yan and Xun Er in the beginning of the book. Such blatant plagiarism is very off-putting, especially since most readers have already read *Battle Through the Heavens*. Even the use of references became nauseating due to their excessive frequency. However, the later parts are much better. The entire style changes after the soul emerges from the ring. The invisible wingman, the Pill Emperor, helps Li Guanyuan stay on the first level. The cross-server chat between the two sides is quite witty; one side sees them as enemies, the other as lovers. The relationship between the Master and the Holy Son...
It's been three years. Do you know how I've gotten through these three years? The idol you chose...