I Was Infected by a Virus and Became an Esper

The reason you can't get published is that firstly, each chapter doesn't have a title. Secondly, I skimmed through a few chapters and didn't understand the content or the main chapters; the post-apocalyptic setting lacked any sense of the real world, and I still didn't understand what the X-virus was even after reading to the end.

The writing style is immature

Wow! They actually signed a contract! I can't bear to look!

What kind of rubbish is this? The timeline is all over the place. If you straightened out the timeline and wrote around 200,000 words, your book would definitely be ready for publication.

Thumbs up for the amazing author! Also, everyone should check out my new novel, "My Girlfriend is Turning into an Evil Witch!"

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Why did I hear indescribable sounds when I was listening to the audiobook up to chapter 16? It kept saying "opop"?

It's updated!!!

Double thumbs up! I admire you, author! Keep it up! For those looking for something to read, click on my profile picture.

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