I'm Both the Apocalypse's Empress and a Beautiful, Virtuous Wife

This book reminded me of The Darkest Night...

The beginning was so awkward it gave me goosebumps. I didn't see the male lead do anything to increase the female lead's affection, and she's already clinging to him after only a dozen or so minutes? There's absolutely no build-up to their relationship. Can anyone tell me if the writing improved later on? The core of "transformation marriage" isn't about marriage, it's about transformation—completely becoming a woman, both physically and emotionally, and then marrying someone in the process. Author, you've completely missed the core!

Frankly, the opening of this story has too many flaws. These include, but are not limited to, too many meaningless supporting characters, too much meaningless internal monologue, too many meaningless physical descriptions, and too much meaningless plot. The author often dedicates an entire chapter, or even two or three, to describing many pointless things. This results in a huge pile of useless chapters that can be skipped without affecting the reading experience. Meanwhile, the main plot seems to be nowhere in sight. Readers come for the story, not to see how you describe the appearance of this or that person, or to see what their reaction is after eating the protagonist's vegetables. It's not that these things can't be described, but...

There's probably no movie that gives away freebies faster than this one; it's practically a freebie given away at the speed of light.

This type of book is rare, but the author's pacing in the plot is too fast, and the dialogue and emotional descriptions between characters are too stiff, making it feel awkward to read. Even in a mindless, feel-good novel, excessive enjoyment can feel uncomfortable, lacking any sense of immersion. The protagonist's gender reversal and psychological transformation seem a bit too rapid. Inserting a scene where the male lead marries isn't inherently bad, but given that the protagonist is destined to become the Empress, the fact that the male lead was a teammate recruited early on feels very jarring. It completely lacks the satisfying feel of a typical wish-fulfillment novel. Even if it's not a domineering CEO type of male lead, at least...

Upon reviewing it again, I discovered that much of the content had been censored.

I was looking for a post-apocalyptic novel with a female protagonist and stumbled upon this one. Is it good?

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First, let me clarify that this is my first book review. I initially got hooked because of the author's use of suggestive language. The writing style is really bad; the language is too stiff, and I felt awkward reading many parts. Later, the author was probably warned for the suggestive content, and the suggestive parts were removed, making the already somewhat off-putting novel even more so. Also, what's the meaning of the newly revised opening with the female lead having green hair? Is it hinting at something? Furthermore, the author's titles are too suggestive; you can immediately guess what's going to happen. The plot is basically predictable; you don't even need to read a single page. The plot is easy to guess. As for the subject matter, it's quite good, but if...

As a light novel, it's indeed quite good, but the insertion of the setting feels somewhat forced, and the original male lead's psychological descriptions are not detailed enough, making many parts cringe-worthy. I hope the author carefully considers the word choice and transitions, especially strengthening the psychological descriptions of the characters to avoid abrupt plot connections. However, I personally find the setting very appealing; this kind of post-apocalyptic transformation and marriage theme is rare and very eye-catching. The author's writing style is also very immersive. However, I think the pacing of the story could be slowed down. The section from the arrival of the apocalypse to the original male lead's transformation could have been expanded upon, including the relationship between Su Xue and the Empress...