A Proper Sword Immortal Can't Be Conquered by a Sword-Crazed Woman

First, I admire Xiaolu's attitude towards reviews—his positive responses to readers' feedback and questions, and his politeness and respect for the varying degrees of optimism and negativity in the comments section (as well as some what I consider purely subjective venting). I've always believed that the atmosphere of discussion between authors and readers about a novel is built on mutual friendliness and respect. In this respect, I feel that Xiaolu's "humility in seeking guidance," as a novice author, has been maintained along with the novel's progress. His seriousness and approachability towards readers also allowed even a nitpicky reader like myself to...

I don't even get any requests to update! Are you all this laid-back?

The protagonist isn't impotent... I've already started writing the romance scenes.

I was initially drawn in by the "invincible" label. At the time, the author had less than 1000 favorites, wasn't popular, and didn't have a high level of engagement. However, the similarities between the protagonist and Ainz Ooal Gown, and the similar settings of the Demon Abyss and the Great Tomb of Nazarick, kept me following. Personally, I quite like Ainz Ooal Gown because the Great Tomb of Nazarick, as a species of alien race, possesses overwhelming power against humans, and I really like the invincible and intimidating protagonist trope. I think the invincibility is there to emphasize the exhilaration and provide readers with a sense of satisfaction that they can't experience in real life but can derive from into the novel. Ainz Ooal Gown doesn't...

The holy sword Tiruminus Ester of Kazehaya Kamito in "Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance" is essentially the same as our protagonist, Shiraha Kaori, except that it is a naked holy sword, while ours is an ascetic sword immortal.

A celibate sword immortal! I love him so much!

Finally surpassed 1000 favorites!

Ugh... I've been updating so diligently lately, why is my collection not increasing but decreasing instead... I'm going to cry.

This is my first time writing a long review. The highlight of this book is its grand scale, but such a large scale can easily lead to inconsistencies in the hierarchical structure. Some of the detailed descriptions are a bit too fast; slowing down the pace and focusing on more nuanced descriptions would likely improve the experience and prevent awkwardness. A fast pace is a bad habit of mine when writing (lol), but I've already corrected it. It's mainly about mindset; there's no need to rush to deliver a climax. Sometimes, some build-up is necessary. Otherwise, it can backfire. While a captivating beginning is certainly desirable, and certain plot devices are very effective, this is, after all, a novel with a grand scale...

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