What Should I Do After Losing My Memory and Being Overprotected by My Maids?

The approach is too straightforward and lacks detail. When describing the past, more background information and internal dialogue could be added, such as in the initial scene with Zi Yan. When she leaves the protagonist, more detail could be given to her inner turmoil. Some characters lack emotional depth. Since I haven't finished reading, I currently feel that only Hong Fengyue has a relatively rich emotional life, and even the male protagonist's personality isn't very distinct. I suggest not adding a female lead yet, and trying to give the characters emotional depth, for example, by appropriately weaving events that form a bond between the male and female leads. For a newcomer, this is actually quite good; I look forward to your future progress.

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