The Immortal Witch Is Tired of Living

If your writing skills aren't up to par, don't use the first person. Otherwise, you'll find that the first person can't explain things clearly, and you'll have to switch to the third person to make up for it, which feels very confusing. Also, the protagonist's character development is completely stagnant. It's understandable that the protagonist is useless at the beginning, but what's the point of still being useless after dozens of chapters?

Well, I just finished reading the first major chapter of this work, and I'll be giving my personal review based on that. In my opinion, the work has both obvious strengths and weaknesses: its strength lies in the author's unique perspective (this isn't like those formulaic works on Pineapple Bun, though I don't deny there are some excellent pieces). A true writer always writes from their heart. The clever plot, decent writing, and slightly Cthulhu-esque worldview are what resonated with me. It's important to maintain something unique. Regarding the comments, many people complained about the female lead and said they couldn't continue reading. What I want to say is, since you...

Author, this synopsis is deceptive! This thing will probably have to wait until chapters 700 or 800.

At first, everything was fine, but ever since the protagonist came out of the castle, the art style seems to have changed. It went from a depressing/healing style to a silly and cute adventure full of casual games. Apart from being defeated by two knights at the beginning and then using his special move to wipe out the knights investigating the castle in one go, the protagonist always fails in every battle, and every time he fails, he has to call for help. The key is that the reason for these failures is that the protagonist is stupid, does not think things through, or has never fought before.

Actually, this book started as a casual beginning, and I gradually refined some of the settings and finalized the plot. Some people have mentioned the slow pace, but that's mainly because I wanted to build up space for later installments. Also, I didn't think too much about it while writing. Although I've written over a million words, I'm still practically a novice. I'm far behind those geniuses and seasoned writers. Regarding the introduction, the main events will begin in volumes three and four, or at the earliest, volume three. The academy arc mainly focuses on some strange things and pushing the female protagonist towards the Black Tower…

I've turned into a voice chat god of war! I'm going to die! I'm really going to die! Ah Lai is going crazy! I just want to go to sleep. Waaaaah!

Sister Time is gone too...

March bonus update rules: 20 monthly tickets or 2000 reward points for one update. Also, I need to start making up for the missed updates! Time to work hard! But I still need to prioritize quality; there are too many typos, I need more time to proofread.

Forced loli transformation is the most fatal flaw! The character was initially shaped like a mature woman, then she was transformed into a loli. Why not just be a loli from the start?

The cover has been changed, it's pretty good.