Xiao Yi: Who's stronger, me or Medusa?
Xiao Yan: Of course you're stronger.
Xiao Yi: Who's smarter, me or Little Fairy Doctor?
Xiao Yan: Of course you are.
Xiao Yi: Who's cuter, me or Nalan Yanran?
Xiao Yan: Of course you are.
Xiao Yi: Who's prettier, me or Yun Yun?
Xiao Yan: Of course you are.
Xiao Yi: Who's more devious, me or Xun'er?
Xiao Yan: Of course you are... Wait, no...
Xiao Yi: Xiao Hei, Xiao Bai! Get him!
Xiao Yan: My dear wife, I was wrong! She's the most devious!
Xiao Yi: That's more like it.
This is the story of a chuuni boy who transmigrates into Battle Through the Heavens.
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Fair evaluation
As the previous author said, many time-travelers steal wives, but few actually become wives. Then, some minor issues were pointed out in the book, starting with typos. The timeline is also confusing; if the author doesn't want to revise it, they should add a line each time: "Don't use your brain when reading fanfiction." The protagonist's Hanlu always reminds me of Frostmourne, it's very reminiscent of that. The issue with Xun'er needs to be resolved, and the later Medusa (this should be avoided if Xiao Yan makes a fool of himself) also needs to be addressed. Otherwise, there will be situations like [Xun'er cuts open Xiao Yi's stomach and says: "As expected, there's nothing there."] And then Xun'er hugs Xiao Yan...
Today I bought a pigeon, and my brother saw it and wanted to eat it too, but there was only one. While looking at the Lolita Bun, I thought about it and realized I had a really fat pigeon. Making it would not only be enough for us, but we could also share it with the handsome guys who like this post.
It's common knowledge that good Doupo (Douluo) fanfiction often inexplicably stops updating.
Just rambling a bit
This book is quite novel! The ones I've read before are all about transmigrating to steal wives – directly and violently stealing them, becoming brothers with Xiao Yan while fighting for wives, or even transmigrating as a woman and still fighting Xiao Yan for his wife. But who can blame me when Xiao Yan's wives are all so beautiful? Also, regarding the system, as long as it doesn't constantly eliminate people and isn't too unfair, I can accept it, because I think systems are just for assistance. Then there's the protagonist's talent. I only noticed one thing: playing with ice. Although it's a bit overdone, I still feel ice is cooler (personal opinion). I think this ice has many uses, more than the main character's…
Honestly, it's hard to imagine the protagonist having the mental fortitude to look at a woman with admiration after almost being sexually assaulted. Only someone with a screw loose could pull off such a thing.
While visiting graves, and by the way, I personally feel—and just my personal opinion—that the Zerg concept is a bit redundant!
Tomb sweeping, burning paper money, offering incense, blowing up graves
Didn't you say you would never go back on your word?
Tomb sweeping~ (weak and listless)
The author died suddenly.